ODIPack3 submissions (Release when graphics are done)

**icontrolyourworld** · 04-3-2013, 10:29 AM

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I need to hurry with my pack before it's too late x.x

**baq12** · 04-3-2013, 11:13 AM

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Curious to what you think of lawn wake II

**AlexDest** · 04-3-2013, 01:40 PM

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Originally posted by dascookieman

asdfmovie6
it's fun, the streams and the parts in between them are awesome, but the beginning was too long. it is a bit boring to get to the good part of the file, everything repeats too much in the beginning, we should solve this with a cut. the streams rule and the freeze-part between them rules, but i think the last part with the freezes should be remade without freezes, it very easy to mess up and i feel like they just make it unnecessarily difficult to read, and you already have the cool freeze-part between the streams that obviously is very similar to this part. i would likely accept this after revision

sweet

where do you prefer to cut the song?

Originally posted by dascookieman

centaur
great job it's very accurately stepped, the layering seems perfect and the pitch-relevance is really nice. but this would by far and away be the easiest file in the pack, for most part it just has too few arrows simply :P. i like it otherwise it's a different file to a different song and it's well-made but it just never became that much fun because there was so little going on

was going for an expressive feel for the song. oh well.

**t-rogdor** · 04-3-2013, 02:07 PM

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Originally posted by dascookieman

bit howl (revision)
accepted

yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sick

time to start on another file gonna get that shit outta the way today

**Shadow_God_10** · 04-4-2013, 02:45 AM

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Sent in my first of 13 billion submissions

did you get my E-mail about Gravestoned

**dascookieman** · 04-4-2013, 06:34 AM

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sent cut songs to you guys

more reviews later today

also icy... just wait til you see nick's file

**dascookieman** · 04-4-2013, 12:31 PM

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lawn wake II
fun, nice and hard file, challenging in a fun way for most part. but it seemed a bit sloppily made. it could also use an easier difficulty for sure

kouen
not bad at all but it's not that much fun since some of the hard parts are so awkward to hit correctly with the minijack-jumps/hands rhythms. it's not all too special to begin with but i thought it was fun because it was challenging with fun minijacks for a while, and it like that it gets progressively harder but it didn't get harder in a fun way at all unfortunately. it's a shame nothing cooler than that happened in the song.

maniera
cool file but it had a lot more potential i thought. pretty fun but some parts could be made so much more interesting. you could also have a superhard edit difficulty if you want to

measure 6&8 end of the measure, i think that sound you have jumps to is playing 1 more note
measure 8 too many jumps around the beginning of the measure?
measure 15 shouldn't the 8th in the 16ths also be a jump because the piano hits? you could just add, and you could add it and not have jumps to the snare drum, or you can add it and make the snare drums a minijack with a jump instead, would be p cool
measure 17-22 i think this part could have better PR but it's up to you
measure 23 the notes begin a bit earlier
measure 27 cool drumnotes missing
measure 29&30 missing drums in the end
measure 31-32 lots of missing drums but perhaps it's intentional, but i think it would be really cool with the drums added and perhap less hands/jumps to the piano
measure 43 it's not constant 8ths
measure 51 i would like it if the patterns changed when the sound increases in pitch, just put other really easy patterns, perhaps don't start off with the staircases, get to them in the end
measure 56 don't think you should have these 3 first 16ths to the percussion since it's also playing at the same time as you have your next 16ths to the piano, and that would make 16th jumps there (which could also work)
measure 57&58 missing percussion 16th at the end but still i dunno if you should have percussion in this section at all
measure 60 same here first it's percussion then it's abandoned when the piano is playing 16ths
measure 63 missing piano 16th in the end and one 16th too much (the very last)
measure 65 why no cool percussion minigallops?
measure 71-73 no matter if the jumps are to the snare drums or the piano chords, they're not accurate
measure 80-86&88-91 there is so much more to add
measure 91 you shouldn't abandon the piano to have the 16th drums, 12ths over 16ths is fun and it wouldn't be inconsistently difficult
measure 101 the drums are faster in the very end

i didn't check every single part of it, i feel like this was pretty sloppy work compared to your other files. revise it and resubmit and this can be accepted for sure

my dog don't even care about apocalypse
iii doooon't eeven..... .... i mean it was actually fun at times lol. but some parts were not so amazing lol, for example when it was sped up songs with just one million 8th jumps, got old pretty fast. the short fast stream were pretty fun and the jacks were kinda fu, but overall it's a bit repetetive, lol it's funny with the music being what it is but the steps to it just naturally doesn't turn out that great. i could possibly accept this after a cut with the best parts patched together but it's a bit of a longshot

not eternity
far, far too easy and uneventful. i fell asleep 30 seconds in and never woke up again

osakan bash riddim
the hard parts were a bit fun but the file completly lacks any flow. it's so easy for most part and not that much fun or special, then a couple of really hard parts comes out of nowhere, which weren't too amazing but kind of fun. but then it goes back to being supereasy and no flow. the hard parts would've worked in another file where the rest was also challenging and fun.

rally race
solid file but something else needed to happen. it's the same similar easy 16ths rhythms mostly throughout, and the part that is a bit different is also very easy, just not a very memorable file. for files this easy the bar is very high

waltz no 17 in g minor
SO FUCKING HARD LOL. it's really fun at times, but at times it's just stupid. you have to be careful with patterns when you make files this hard, in the middle and end there were a few sections with lots of 8th jumps and 12ths that came in almost impossible patterns to hit, it has to be changed to be a bit easier pattern-wise. a lot of the jacks are great though and i love them in a file that is this hard anyway. i think i heard a few errors in the early parts as well too but overall it seemed accurately made. in the end with the 48ths you should change the patterns too because it was supergay, and in that entire part it's a bit too much left-hand. i could accept this after revision, it will be the hardest file in the pack!

**intensez** · 04-4-2013, 12:49 PM

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thats the most amount of rejected files in one post since this pack started

**bmah** · 04-4-2013, 01:38 PM

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Originally posted by dascookieman

maniera
cool file but it had a lot more potential i thought. pretty fun but some parts could be made so much more interesting. you could also have a superhard edit difficulty if you want to

There's already a superhard chart for maniera in one of GD's FFR community packs. If it's the song I'm thinking of (by Musical Masterpiece).

**baq12** · 04-4-2013, 01:41 PM

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I'll get started on fixing lawn wake when I get home. What's the final verdict on insect digestion melancholy? As well as canon rock? I can fix canon rock again if I need to.

**AlexDest** · 04-4-2013, 02:21 PM

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Re-sending asdfmovie6 song.

**xVaLoRx** · 04-4-2013, 02:24 PM

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Originally posted by dascookieman

rally race
solid file but something else needed to happen. it's the same similar easy 16ths rhythms mostly throughout, and the part that is a bit different is also very easy, just not a very memorable file. for files this easy the bar is very high

ugh. now I feel somewhat obligated to finish menu theme....

**NeoMasterPie** · 04-4-2013, 02:37 PM

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RIP kouen

**Nick Skyline** · 04-4-2013, 03:55 PM

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Originally posted by AlexDest

Re-sending asdfmovie6 song.

Well, speaking of asdf...I have graphics for that file that, I guess...fit the file.

You can all thank Tom later.

**dascookieman** · 04-4-2013, 04:44 PM

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LOL WaT

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