Poem: In the sky

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  • Midnighter
    FFR Player
    • May 2009
    • 49
    #16
    Re: Poem: In the sky

    Originally posted by crumheart32605
    This is crap
    There's no need to waste space on my thread if you've got nothing constructive to say. thank you

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      • sweetrowan
        FFR Veteran
        • Apr 2011
        • 5
        #17
        Re: Poem: In the sky

        Hmmm... A way to deal with the 'heaviness' of poetic forms like this is often to enjamb the lines. See "Terzanelle in Thunderweather" by Lewis Turco for a good example. It's in a related poetic form that he deals with admirably.
        The acorn dreams of oak trees.

        "Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly will acquire the skill to do difficult things easily." - Johann von Schiller

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          • Sol_Solis
            FFR Player
            • Aug 2005
            • 661
            #18
            Re: Poem: In the sky

            Wow, so amazing

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              • sakura080789
                Rapture Universe
                • Feb 2007
                • 1751
                #19
                Re: Poem: In the sky

                i enjoyed it good job

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