this is a poem titled Roses

[f2ppure]

Re: this is a poem titled Roses

nice , though it looks familiar . also reminds me of Dickinson, which makes me give it another thumbs up

[kitkat9]

Re: this is a poem titled Roses

nice , though it looks familiar . also reminds me of Dickinson, which makes me give it another thumbs up

Well thank you very much! =D

[mead1]

Re: this is a poem titled Roses

Oh I don't mean to say anything crude. I just mean that you'd want to make the rose seem like a person, and a person one would be attracted to. Use adjectives like alluring, supple, radiant, enchanting, stuff like that. Words that you'd use in a love poem. Then when you talk about how the rose's thorns hurt you, you can talk about them like a lover who cheated on you.

This is all just a suggestion, of course. In the end it's your vision that you have to satisfy.

This said, I'd totally read a sexually explicit rose/sex poem. That would be amazing.

[NFD]

Re: this is a poem titled Roses

I put my rose into her
She started moaning
One of my thorns pierced her

[kitkat9]

Re: this is a poem titled Roses

I put my rose into her
She started moaning
One of my thorns pierced her

Uhh...

[Tired_Old_Man]

Re: this is a poem titled Roses

focus on simile because that's my favorite poetic device. Also I would recommend not ever looking for advice on FFR>

[NFD]

Re: this is a poem titled Roses

Uhh...

Jealous I know.

[kitkat9]

Re: this is a poem titled Roses

Jealous I know.

No, not really.

focus on simile because that's my favorite poetic device. Also I would recommend not ever looking for advice on FFR>

Well, I don't see why I shouldn't look for advice. Quite a few people know what they are talking about. And would you be one of the people to not take advice from?

[NFD]

Re: this is a poem titled Roses

No, not really.


Well, I don't see why I shouldn't look for advice. Quite a few people know what they are talking about. And would you be one of the people to not take advice from?

You are jealous. Just admit it. I am the poetry master. I have been called the "Songbird of our time".

[Erothyme]

Re: this is a poem titled Roses

One of my thorns pierced her

Just how many thorns do you have?

[NFD]

Re: this is a poem titled Roses

Just how many thorns do you have?

A few.

[kitkat9]

Re: this is a poem titled Roses

You are jealous. Just admit it. I am the poetry master. I have been called the "Songbird of our time".

Is that right?