no title ... plz read

[robertsona]

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it's anyone's business when you post a thread in a forum lmao
it looks like you can't handle criticism very well
also, you should be respectful to veterans like foilman

[Quigly]

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Wow that's a cliche poem...choose a topic that hasn't been written about 173954239873 times. mkay?

[bbe-doll]

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it's anyone's business when you post a thread in a forum lmao
it looks like you can't handle criticism very well
also, you should be respectful to veterans like foilman

you stfu and leave me alone to

[GamerShadow]

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We're sorry, would you like us to congratulate you and put you and your work upon a magical golden pedestal and compliment you on your fantastic masterpiece which shall remain forever unmatched?

Lurk more. It's constructive criticism or bust in the Literature forum. If you can't take it, get the heck out.

[gnr61]

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your all dumb
this person is obviously a troll
and a hilarious one at that

it is for the sake of mankind that we cannot allow ourselves to believe this is an actual person

[who_cares973]

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tell you what leave me the fuk alone and mind your own busnis
get a life
u cant leave me alone can you

this made me laugh

[robertsona]

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Alright, I think this has gone far enough.
Reported.

[bbe-doll]

Re: no title ... plz read

We're sorry, would you like us to congratulate you and put you and your work upon a magical golden pedestal and compliment you on your fantastic masterpiece which shall remain forever unmatched?

Lurk more. It's constructive criticism or bust in the Literature forum. If you can't take it, get the heck out.

tell you what syfm and ill stop posting poems if you hate them so much

[blackbuterfly451]

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Maybe you should've read these before posting:

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showthread.php?t=38348

Especially #2, because while you weren't begging for feedback you should have expected some.

[foilman8805]

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i hate u guyz ur so mean
i take this nife and stab my spleen
i wish u guyz would stfu and leave me alone
ur criticizm hurts and cuts to the bone
i just wanna tell u how i feel
this pain i have is all 2 real

[Quigly]

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i hate u guyz ur so mean
i take this nife and stab my spleen
i wish u guyz would stfu and leave me alone
ur criticizm hurts and cuts to the bone
i just wanna tell u how i feel
this pain i have is all 2 real

Now THIS is poetry genius.

[AznGreen]

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this poem made me feel like raping myself... that's a good thing since my school is full of emotion people and the stuff they wrote is 9999 times worse than this.

[x After Dawn x]

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Well for the love of God people, this poem didn't hurt anyone.

I believe you are wrong.

tell you what syfm and ill stop posting poems if you hate them so much

First of all, "syfm?" I'm assuming you meant "stfu", but were too ignorant to recheck your post. Second of all, this is a forum. You post here to communicate with others, and in this forum, you post to receive both criticism and opinion of your poem. When you post here, it is for everybody to see and judge. If you can't handle the criticism, then why did you even post this here in the first place? It's basically doing something against what you wanted to do. If we hate your poem, why not try and take our advice and utilize it to embellish your future poems instead of telling veterans and respected members of the forum to "stfu?"

[foilman8805]

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syfm = shut your ****ing mouth

Essentially the same thing as stfu.

[x After Dawn x]

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Oh. I see I have some lurking to do.