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  • MalReynolds
    CHOCK FULL O' NUTRIENTS
    • Sep 2003
    • 6571

    #16
    Re: Please, Stop

    I left the ending open to interpretation, but their is a finite reason behind the story. I just won't say what.
    "A new take on the epic fantasy genre... Darkly comic, relatable characters... twisted storyline."

    "Readers who prefer tension and romance, Maledictions: The Offering, delivers... As serious YA fiction, I’ll give it five stars out of five. As a novel? Four and a half." - Liz Ellor


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    • Netjet!
      Sic itur ad astra
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Jan 2008
      • 4701

      #17
      Re: Please, Stop

      That was very well written, Mal. To me, it speaks of a sadness of the mind from the driver's point of view. It seemed that the girl had no longer felt happiness, and was confined into a deep sadness. To me, it looked like she knew what was coming, as the driver thought about death being inevitable. She knew what would happen, but he didnt. He slowed down, because of her. And because of her, he cheated death. It just seems like that's kind of ironic how he was saying about there being no point of cheating death, yet he had done so.

      Nice story mal.
      RIP Steve Van Ness <3

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