Constructive Criticism Please :D

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  • Tokzic
    FFR Player
    • May 2005
    • 6878

    #16
    Re: Constructive Criticism Please

    In both of them, you're masking cliches with vocabulary.

    That basically summarizes both poems. Taylor hit it dead on.

    Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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