ღ♥ღ♥my farewellღ♥ღ♥

[phe0nixblade]

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Guys, it's in the literature section for a reason, she wants to know how her poem was. I'd say it was alright, you showed how you felt the whole way through, but less pics. As Chunky said, maybe limit it to one that shows emotion for the entire thing.

[alster1]

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p.....i.....a.....n....
wait wtf does that spell....
ohhhhh pain ok
well she sorta already told us what her poem is gonna be like

[MagicCarpetRide]

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Is this a suicide note? haha
Emos!

[phe0nixblade]

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Emos!

[KilikOdagawa]

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Excellent poetry, it's superb. Instead of most bits an pieces of rhymes i read, this one actually had me thinking that you were heartbroken. That's mood for you. You should write more.

[Tokzic]

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lmfao if this isn't a troll it's kind of pathetic that someone made a poem based on icons

[Fantasticone]

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Found the icons humorous.

PS: How about someone actually attempt to write a non-emo poem one of these days.

[Tokzic]

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i'll take you up on that fantasticone the first unit of my writer's craft course is poetry so i'm going to have to put some **** together and i'll probably post it here

ps poems are typically emotional but jrockette here doesn't seem to understand that posting nine hundred billion poems saying I LOVE YOU WHY DON'T YOU LOVE ME ;_; is extremely cliche and dull

[ShastaTwist]

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Make your lines shorter. What you're saying in two or three lines can easily be put into one stanza and it's easier to read.