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  • L0NEvvolf
    FFR Veteran
    • Nov 2006
    • 2068

    #1

    poetry

    things ive written
    A HEARTS ONLY DESIRE

    Why is it that the only one you ever wanted and will ever want to be with is the one that you know you will never be able to be with. And tears slowly begin to fill your eyes because all you want is to be with them. There the only person that makes you smile for no reason and the only person you feel you could ever love because your heart has gone through so much pain over that one person that you feel there is no possible way you can endure anymore without dieing and so you need that person more then life itself. What causes the most pain though is the fact that know matter what you do or know matter how hard you try they will never love you. dose this mean that you should just give up and die probely not but ive felt like dieing for so long. How is it that the strongest of mussels that will beat for your entire life can be scared so easily by a mere person and cause you pain for the rest of your life

    THE FINAL QUESTION

    When you stare death in the eyes even you will be happy to finally end your suffering, and will let go of your soul to the cold dark earth, which will devour you and hold your bones captive in its rocky prisons, to be unearthed and tossed aside as the next creations of society take its place.
    Is there really any place you will go when you pass away. Will your soul drift and evaporate or will it remain. Will it hover the earth and still hold fast to your consciousness or will you be unaware that in death you still roam the earth.
    Is it possible that your soul will find a place to stay. Will you go to a heaven of sorts or will you be cast into a fiery dungeon where your suffering will continue for all eternity
    Or could it be that as your last breath passes your lips you will feel so overjoyed that even the pain is washed away as your blood is spilt and then you just see a darkened sea, never again to suffer, never again to cry.


    ACCEPTENCE
    why is it that the sea of people around you have such an effect on each and every individual constantly complicating the lives of every young man and women within the swarm. why cant everyone accept each other for who and how they are so that none feel left out lonely and abandoned and stirring the emotions within there hearts until they feel as though they cannot continue. why is it that parents say they love there children unconditionally and yet the child hides who they truly are from them and the rest of the world so that the world will not desert them. they conceal all of there inward thoughts in order to be accepted by others. why cant everyone care for each other then there would never be any problems in the world. why cant they understand.

    Puppy
    His golden fur sparkled in the sun light as he jumped onto my lap his body radiated warmth into my shivering arms and he turned to me his tongue hanging down and he kissed my cheek, dropping the ball back onto my lap where it originally sat. picking it up his blue eyes followed it with keen perception and as it let off my hand he jumped in the direction of the throw and began running toward the tennis ball.
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  • mead1
    Cerebellumberjack
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Aug 2003
    • 3960

    #2
    Re: poetry

    Where is the "none of the above" option.

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    • MagicCarpetRide
      Skware One
      • Jun 2006
      • 1125

      #3
      Re: poetry

      Boring...
      But I'll give you credit for trying.

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      • ShastaTwist
        FFR Veteran
        • Sep 2004
        • 599

        #4
        Re: poetry

        Blocks of text are not poems.

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        • Tokzic
          FFR Player
          • May 2005
          • 6878

          #5
          Re: poetry

          why the hell is it that people like calling their unoriginal, uninspired, and gut-wrenchingly poor quality prose "poetry"

          it doesn't add any credibility or grandeur to it

          Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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          • Tibs
            FFR Player
            • May 2006
            • 5235

            #6
            Re: poetry

            dadada dadada RHYME A
            dadada dadada RHYME A
            dadada RHYME B
            dadada RHYME B
            dadada dadada RHYME A

            Metal covers of vidya game songs

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            • Chrissi
              FFR Player
              • Mar 2004
              • 3019

              #7
              Re: poetry

              i like your poem tibs
              C is for Charisma, it's why people think I'm great! I make my friends all laugh and smile and never want to hate!

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