my poem-i need you...to love me

[Windscarredfaith]

Re: my poem-i need you...to love me

Nice idea and poem, but you should run it by Spell Check first.

[orly101]

Re: my poem-i need you...to love me

this

is Spartaaaa!!!!

LMAO!

[Dimitri13]

Re: my poem-i need you...to love me

Hey, hey...

I have an idea.

Instead of bashing her poems, why don't you write one so that we can all beat it to death too?

Lol, I KNOW I can't write poems, so I don't. People should write good poems, not angsty emokid crybaby poems.

[ShastaTwist]

Re: my poem-i need you...to love me

Lol, I KNOW I can't write poems, so I don't. People should write good poems, not angsty emokid crybaby poems.

People write poetry to get their emotions out.

You probably don't belong in the Literature forum.

[Dimitri13]

Re: my poem-i need you...to love me

People write poetry to get their emotions out.

You probably don't belong in the Literature forum.

There's a difference between angsty emokid poems and emotional poems.

[Edit] There's also a difference between a poet, and an attention-whore.

[ShastaTwist]

Re: my poem-i need you...to love me

She's thirteen, give her a freaking break.

[Dimitri13]

Re: my poem-i need you...to love me

Why should I?

Especially at that age, a person should be taught the difference. That's when that kind of stuff usually emerges and starts influencing people into doing stupid crap.

[ShastaTwist]

Re: my poem-i need you...to love me

When you're thirteen years old, you're not going to be some amazing poet unless you're exceptionally talented. I don't know where you're from or how you've been taught but, through all my years of school, my teachers have never attempted to humiliate me in an attempt to teach me something.

Again, read the rules. You're supposed to give constructive criticism. All you came in here to say was, "yay more angsty crybaby poems, blahblah." Clearly a good teaching mechanism.

[Dimitri13]

Re: my poem-i need you...to love me

When you're thirteen years old, you're not going to be some amazing poet unless you're exceptionally talented. I don't know where you're from or how you've been taught but, through all my years of school, my teachers have never attempted to humiliate me in an attempt to teach me something.

Again, read the rules. You're supposed to give constructive criticism. All you came in here to say was, "yay more angsty crybaby poems, blahblah." Clearly a good teaching mechanism.

Ok.

1. I'm not a teacher. But, I think my point should be made no matter who or how.
2. Here's some constructive criticism. You shouldn't write angsty emokid stuff, it's just a fad and could lead down bad roads. And if it isn't a fad, and sticks, then god help us all.