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  • whiteflame
    FFR Player
    • Sep 2005
    • 378
    #16
    Re: B.A.C.

    What the **** was in the box, DAMNIT MAL.

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      • ShastaTwist
        FFR Veteran
        • Sep 2004
        • 599
        #17
        Re: B.A.C.

        Sorry, but the ending was cliché.

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          • Raziel_Darkeden
            FFR Player
            • Nov 2006
            • 337
            #18
            Re: B.A.C.

            It would help if you just posted it all in one big post.

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              • MalReynolds
                CHOCK FULL O' NUTRIENTS
                • Sep 2003
                • 6571
                #19
                Re: B.A.C.

                It would probably help more too if I wrote it all out at once instead of posting it five pages a day as I write it.

                It would probably also help if I didn't use passive voice.
                "A new take on the epic fantasy genre... Darkly comic, relatable characters... twisted storyline."

                "Readers who prefer tension and romance, Maledictions: The Offering, delivers... As serious YA fiction, I’ll give it five stars out of five. As a novel? Four and a half." - Liz Ellor


                My new novel:

                Maledictions: The Offering.

                Now in Paperback!

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