For winter days.

[KamonKi]

Re: For winter days.

yea FFR ish for winter days yeah lol n.n

[ShastaTwist]

Re: For winter days.

yea FFR ish for winter days yeah lol n.n

Do you have anything intelligent to add to any of the conversations in the Literature Forum?

[sujishishou]

Re: For winter days.

Before I seem like a really mean jerk that goes around insulting people....
La, I think your poem is very good. It would win a prize where I am from. And that is saying alot. I come from a very artistic neighborhood.

[la]

Re: For winter days.

I wasn't judging you as a jerk for voicing your thoughts. You don't have to re-assure me that I'm good enough.

Don't worry about it.

[All_That_Chaz]

Re: For winter days.

Also, this poem wasn't meant to be "enigmatic" or to "confuse the mind". It's a poem I wrote based on an experience I had. There's nothing that was supposed to "hinder reason" in the whole poem.

*hint* once the poem is out of your hands, you don't control the interpretation. i was just trying to be nice, i agree with mead, you write a pile of prose. Even free verse has more structure than this.

[sujishishou]

Re: For winter days.

hey la! i am too from Texas!!
what a coincidence!

[la]

Re: For winter days.

Prose, poetry, whatever. I'd have to agree that it lacks structure. I just wrote it. I didn't really worry about this kind of thing.

Where in Texas? I live in a suburb near Houston.

[sujishishou]

Re: For winter days.

I live in Keene TX. Thats like south of Ft. Worth about an hour. I am originally from Dallas.

And you should read the poem I just finished writing!!
its on another thread so check it out!

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showthread.php?t=66338