Re: Masokissed (story of mine please read)
Her eyes can't frame her face. That would mean that there are eyes all around her face. Frames are for... the outside of pictures. I don't know why I finished it. A lot of your sentences were incomplete and there were a lot of excess details. Not exactly the best writing I've ever read. However, I figure it all has to start somewhere... >.>
Her eyes can't frame her face. That would mean that there are eyes all around her face. Frames are for... the outside of pictures. I don't know why I finished it. A lot of your sentences were incomplete and there were a lot of excess details. Not exactly the best writing I've ever read. However, I figure it all has to start somewhere... >.>
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