Love, Girls, and DDR

[FoJaR]

Re: From Start To Finish

It then resulted from Joal's yelling to her strength.

It then resulted from Joal's yelling to her strength.

It then resulted from Joal's yelling to her strength.

It then resulted from Joal's yelling to her strength.

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It then resulted from Joal's yelling to her strength.

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[solopro]

Re: Love, Girls, and DDR

UH-OH!


Szanice needs to be careful of those double negatives!

Uh-oh, I forgot to proofread. Aw, well. Screw proofreading.

[whiteflame]

Re: Love, Girls, and DDR

Nice. I like it aside from the few errors.

[mead1]

Re: Love, Girls, and DDR

I'm pretty sure this is missing a "FAAAAAAAARGOOOOOOOOOONNNNN" somewhere in there.

[ddrfreak925]

Re: Love, Girls, and DDR

Continue on with the story please.
-ddrfreak925

[Anti_Formics]

Re: Love, Girls, and DDR

lol solopro. this is about u and dell right?

[solopro]

Dell's Hell

lol solopro. this is about u and dell right?

As a matter of fact, it's a story I just made up. So, yes, it involves Dell.

Chapter 4: Dell's Hell (Originally Called Resort to FFR)

He wiped the rain off his face as he entered his military apartment. It had been raining ever so suddenly for the past three days. Sean never felt more down in his life, next to that winter carnival incident. But, he still felt sad. He got onto the computer real quick after grabbing a root beer from the fridge.

"Let's see if anyone is on FFR," Sean said to himself. He logged on, and saw only 23 other users, none of which were his friends. He didn't bother wasting time. He logged out, and put a jacket on. Sean also grabbed seven dollars and ninty cents for the arcade and some donuts.

Meanwhile, just outside of Starbucks, Rafael, Ashley, and Victoria waited outside in the cold just so the Japanese arcade operators could finish the harvest.

"They do this a lot," Rafael shivered.
"Every time it rains," Vicky added, "and like monthly."

Ashley stood silent when she saw Sean come out of the food court with some hot chocolate in his hands. She exclaimed, "Sean's here!"

Everyone saw him, and he sat down on the steps.

"Let me guess," Sean pondered, "the harvest?"
The two Barnes twins nodded. "They said about 2 more minutes."
"Great, now we'll nearly freeze our asses off."

Then, on the other side of the MWR Walk (the small street where the NEX is just across from), they saw Andrea, Dell, Joal, Haley, and an unexpected person in the group. It was Angel, Alonzo's ex crush, who, although she was tough in situations, was still gentle.

"Great," Sean moaned. "now, my ass will freeze at absolute zero."

Dell ran along with Josh, who seemed to hide behind the others.

"Joshie!" Dell complained. "It's cold as Pluto out here! Can't you run faster?"
Josh shivered, and replied, "If it was cold, I'd be a frozen popsicle right now, or at least my di---" He was cut off by a slap in the face by Andrea.
"Don't go there," she warned.

When everyone was in the arcade, Joal passed Dell a new bottle of water.

"I don't think that body fat will help him from the fall," Joal snickered. "You our it when he spins here next."
Dell felt guilt. "No, I don't want him to be hurt, even though we're friends, but still."
Joal scoffed. "Suit yourself."

Joal snuck over to the player one side of the stage, and poured water over the down and left panels. "What a bitch," she said silently.

Sean, not knowing a danger has ben set, kept spinning. Then he hit the down panel, and slipped backwards, toppling himself onto the safety bar, head first, then fell sideways off the stage. Joal, Angel, and Haley laughed, but the others stood silent. Fiery rage rushed into Dell's veins, like fire from Hell, and she tried to release it, but with her sweet personality, she just can't break it. She knew that Yokosuka was a living Hell.

[ddrfreak925]

Re: Love, Girls, and DDR

Yay!!!! More of the story!!!!
-ddrfreak925

[Tibs]

Re: Love, Girls, and DDR

"You our it when he spins here next."

He what try speak words?

[Anti_Formics]

Re: Love, Girls, and DDR

Solo. You rule.

[solopro]

Re: Love, Girls, and DDR

"You our it when he spins here next."

Oops, it's "You pour it when he spins here next."

[Tokzic]

Re: Love, Girls, and DDR

YES

MORE PLS

[mead1]

Re: Love, Girls, and DDR

more pl0x

[ddr_f4n]

Re: Love, Girls, and DDR

hopefully someone will make a audio version of this story

[YungYung]

Re: Love, Girls, and DDR

rofl wow look at the serious posts.