Re: Linguisticmanias: On the Slang and Jargon of the English-Speaking Stepmania Commu
pretty much that. there are plenty of situations where you can effectively use passive voice and plenty of situations where active voice will sound extremely forced, but in general, using active voice strengthens your writing.
Re: Linguisticmanias: On the Slang and Jargon of the English-Speaking Stepmania Commu
I'm not sure how important this is for your class, but I noticed a number of grammar things you could fix (and you also completely forgot a period at the end of one of your paragraphs h4h4).
This was sure a fun read though A+ would smash arrows to a dramatic reading of this.
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