Re: Piano Concerto No. 1 "Scorpion Fire" MIDI
I'm not going to bother with whether the actual notes are right, but there are a few issues of style:
Measure 5: That low B should really go to the left hand.
Measure 9: accelerando
Measure 10: ritardando
Measures 17-19: Why are there F and C flats? I don't see a good reason for them. E and B naturals would be so much nicer.
Measure 15: Give the first half of the top staff a bass clef, seriously.
Throughout the entire piece: use some 8va things. The ledger lines are annoying. Hell, the first few measures could use 15ma and 8vb!
I'm not going to bother with whether the actual notes are right, but there are a few issues of style:
Measure 5: That low B should really go to the left hand.
Measure 9: accelerando
Measure 10: ritardando
Measures 17-19: Why are there F and C flats? I don't see a good reason for them. E and B naturals would be so much nicer.
Measure 15: Give the first half of the top staff a bass clef, seriously.
Throughout the entire piece: use some 8va things. The ledger lines are annoying. Hell, the first few measures could use 15ma and 8vb!




iono if this will get me banned, but I didn't know if you guys had found a good solid copy of the song ^^ So... here's what I found x]
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