XOON 4 submissions open

[Gundam-Dude]

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updated my review on the previous page.

(SulferDragon) Astro Man Stage
Mini freezes are a nice touch. However, file is too short and lacks replay value. Blame the song choice for the genericness of this file. Rejected.

[kommisar[os]]

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ait boss is back from werk



astro man stage: blame it on song choice, it just doesnt generate anything interesting. reject


evans: file sucks. accep


robotica: this was very cool. only complaint is one part with the pattern 3 jacks over and over. accep


strawbarry's wap chiptune file: very fun to play. about time you made a good file. accep

[Patashu]

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so did you get everything onsync strawbarry? awesome

[PsYcHoZeRoSk8eR]

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If you have a picture that you want me to use, feel free to link me. Psycho and I are doing most of the graphics sets but I automatically get dibs on all Vocaloid and NSFW graphics

1- you can take all vocaloid, I really don't care.
2- You gotta share those

[operationstrawbarry]

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My original plan was to put hands in it, but one thing that I observed in SM is that everything had hands and I wanted to try something different. However, if everyone agrees that hands should be put in the file, then Ill be glad to put in hands in the file. Whatever makes this epic song and file more awsome, Ill do it.

I also dont mind adding the mini freezes if you found some that i missed. A lot of **** goes on in this song and I promise you I missed something. But you will have to give me exact locations though because chances are, I either missed it, or didn't see it as a freeze. On the other hand, Ill replay this file a bit more to see if I missed anything else, but Im sure this is final unless someone finds something that I didn't. Ill be happy to make corrections and resend. What I have in this file is everything that I heard and not missed.

[Gundam-Dude]

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If you have a picture that you want me to use, feel free to link me. Psycho and I are doing most of the graphics sets but I automatically get dibs on all Vocaloid and NSFW graphics

And seeing as the picture used in the chiptune video is Vocaloid (I don't get what relevance it has to the song though...), I might actually have that image laying around somewhere.

/edit

reviewed

(OperationStrawberry) 夜折り折り折り折り折り
Definitely better than both your previous submissions combined. Overall, file was well stepped and is enjoyable to some extent. My only nitpicks with this are the missing hand placements and there are parts where you could've layered mini-freezes to a few background sounds. Accepted. I'll try to see if I can get this translated into English for you.

[operationstrawbarry]

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lol the song sounds cool. the video is awesome too. if it gets accepted it should be the bg

Got patashu to review it twice and kommi looked it over (Thx u 2) and I did as much fixes as Im capable of, and I did a lot and it took a total of 3-4 days, and that includes today.

LOL IM going to say probably the most perverted sentence/paragraph you will ever hear me say: I want a Hentai BG as the background if this gets accepted and I think I have just the one. Honestly though, I dont care what you guys use, although I think something anime and sexy related is more relevent I think. I honestly think this image is better http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glUDD...eature=channel. I get a hard on when I see this and I can't tare my eyes away from it. I wouldn't mind this being the BG, but whatever.

I think I did a really good job on this file btw.

****... I was going to step stomp to my beat from DDR2 for my second file for this pack. Ehhh whatever. Still will step it. I can't believe no one stepped that song yet. Im doing it after my break today. I dont think Ill be done for this pack if subs close tomolo.

[Gundam-Dude]

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If it's a submission from you, Kommi is bound to auto-accept it. I already accepted your file so pretty sure you're safe

[xferrarix]

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judge faster damn it i need to know if evans sucks

[who_cares973]

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Just sent my chiptune file. Heres the song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CM6ElC0QTZw&feature=channel_page

I better not hear that this song is repetitive like most of my selections or Im going to kick something. I can promise that it will be cute and cuddly and alive. Thats right... puppies and kittens.

Not what I would usually step, but this song is just to awsome and no one has even seen it.

lol the song sounds cool. the video is awesome too. if it gets accepted it should be the bg

Is this really when submissions closed? Not saying you are a liar, but I heard the date was september 5th and I just find this hard to believe. Or were you talking to someone else? Just asking because you posted right after I did.

tomolo

[who_cares973]

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no one gets my sheik theme ;_;

[operationstrawbarry]

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Just sent my chiptune file. Heres the song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CM6ElC0QTZw&feature=channel_page

I better not hear that this song is repetitive like most of my selections or Im going to kick something. I can promise that it will be cute and cuddly and alive. Thats right... puppies and kittens.

Not what I would usually step, but this song is just to awsome and no one has even seen it.

tomolo

Is this really when submissions closed? Not saying you are a liar, but I heard the date was september 5th and I just find this hard to believe. Or were you talking to someone else? Just asking because you posted right after I did.

[Gundam-Dude]

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(Ferrari) Evans
A lot less left hand biased than Linus' chart, haha. Accepted. Pretty much will be the Anisakis of this pack.

(Scylaax) Luna Clock
Song didn't need a restep TBH because Zagh's file is fine. Looking past the fact that you restepped, solo was pretty cool. Accepted.

(Scylaax) Metal Squad
Really repetitive. I lost interest and attention throughout most of the file. Once the solo kicked it, the file became more interesting but other than that file is really generic and bland. Rejected

(Scylaax) Moon Child
For a restep, this was pretty good. Enjoyed this one more than the original so I'll Accept.

(Who_Cares973) River Flows In You
Masterful syncing. Initially thought you restepped the original song but I definitely enjoyed this arrangement way more. Accepted.

(Sargon) Robotica
First Korean submission, cool. Overall, file was actually pretty decent however it did get pretty boring considering that the same 48th and 32nd notes popped up every few measures and the layering stays pretty much the same throughout. Accepted.

(TranceCore) Romantic Fall
The sync in the beginning seems off. Overall, layering is good but file lacked fun and replay value. This is usually why I don't step piano compositions or arranges. Rejected.

(Who_Cares973) Sheik Theme
Too short and overall there was no fun or replay value in this. Uniquely stepped but this wouldn't warrant an accept from me. Rejected.

(Diokatsu) The End of 1000 Years
The entire beginning is a mess. Jumps are off with what you're trying to layer and overall you're missing a bunch of notes throughout. This would've been a really cool file too if you stepped it properly. Rejected.

(Scylaax) The Justice Ray III
Awesome song but file is really repetitive. Nothing notable even stood out in this and it lacks replay value. Rejected.

(OperationStrawberry) 夜折り折り折り折り折り
Definitely better than both your previous submissions combined. Overall, file was well stepped and is enjoyable to some extent. My only nitpicks with this are the missing hand placements and there are parts where you could've layered mini-freezes to a few background sounds. Accepted. I'll try to see if I can get this translated into English for you.

(SulferDragon) Astro Man Stage
Mini freezes are a nice touch. However, file is too short and lacks replay value. Blame the song choice for the genericness of this file. Rejected.

[who_cares973]

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maybe they know what fun is

[stargroup]

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50 accepted files and more to come...

If this becomes bigger than DCP, I'll laugh

maybe you guys are too lenient