Daraku no Sono :: FFR Batch Submission
jh05013 - Daraku no Sono - witch's slave [6.5 / 10]
Nov/Dec 2020
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BOFU2015 permission (original title: 堕楽の園).

I originally set the song name as "Illegal Paradise" since it's the official name in Arcaea, but I changed it to "Daraku no Sono".

Simfile Folder Name

Daraku no Sono (jh05013)

Note Count

2037

Chart Length

2:24

Average NPS

14.512

Estimated Difficulty

91.43

First Note

0:04

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -23

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 9 3 - 58 4 - 126

Jumps

x 532

Hands

x 50

Quads

x 1

Color Jumps

x 3

Color Hands

x 1

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
12 - 36.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
16 - 32.00 nps 1 Second
27 - 27.00 nps 2 Seconds
46 - 23.00 nps 5 Seconds
99 - 19.80 nps 10 Seconds
186 - 18.60 nps 30 Seconds
510 - 17.00 nps 1 Minute
973 - 16.22 nps

Color Count

x 732 (35.94%)
x 545 (26.76%)
x 92 (4.52%)
x 530 (26.02%)
x 64 (3.14%)
x 60 (2.95%)
x 14 (0.69%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

1.43s1.43s0.4s0.4s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s
35
28
21
14
7

Folder name fixed

Illegal Paradise (jh05013) [6.5/10]
> Permission check good.
> Sync is off by approximately -0.009 (Music Offset should be -0.059, is currently -0.050). No changes necessary due to how framers are made, but still heavily suggested.
> No issues found within simfile properties.
> File is on Challenge difficulty.
> No issues found within submission folder contents.

-[00:49.344 -> 00:50.059] This was fine at 00:46.487, but this particular section has dominant instruments following 16ths immediately coming out of the 24ths at 00:49.344, and would likely be MUCH more accurate stepping something like this image, because the 16ths are emphasized, as well as the 32nd roll into the next section.

-[00:52.201] Same thing happens here with 16th emphasis, but the 24ths starting at the [12] 4th work as reduction to 32nds.

-[00:58.392] Don’t be afraid to capture the 24ths here into the hand.

-[01:43.898] Missing 16th.

-[02:10.773] Repeat note from timestamp 00:49.344 -> 00:50.059.

-[02:13.630] Same as 00:52.201.

-CQ for general fixes. Mostly timestamps 00:49.344, 00:52.201 and its associated other timestamps. Also, sync fix.

Thanks for the notes. Not sure if I understood the 49.344 and 52.201 notes since the 24ths sounded major to me, but I agree that I can't ignore the 16ths and 32nds either and I put less 16ths/32nds than necessary. Planning to fix them by next week.

+ 02:05.773 shouldn't be a jump, I'll fix that too.

Also, I'm thinking of changing the song name to "Daraku no Sono" because "Illegal" really doesn't feel right to me. Although I'm no expert in Japanese, I think the author wanted to say degradation rather than illegality, because of the author's comment in the BOFU2015 submission:

「何をそんなに頑張るの? 人生"堕ちる"ことも必要だよ?」

But denying the official Arcaea name and using some other translation doesn't feel right either, so I'm going with transliteration: it's accurate, and it's exactly what it's called.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Title changed: Illegal Paradise => Daraku no Sono
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Note Count changed: 2039 => 2037
AVG NPS changed: 14.52279 => 14.51199
Hand Bias changed: -19 => -23

- Sync fixed.
- Song name changed for the aforementioned reason, but for some reason I can't change the submission title...
- Fixed the parts mentioned in the comments. I didn't put a note at 49.612 because I couldn't hear it until I played it on 30% speed.
- 55.059-55.773 and 2:16.487-2:17.201 are not trills anymore, because they sound different from the other trills and I prefer the current one.
- A few note replacements (PR, jump/hand for similar-sounding notes, etc.)

If possible, I would like to have the following notes frame-fixed:

- Note 1694 (yellow) should move 1 frame later and have the same frame as 1695 (purple) instead of 1693 (pink).
- Note 1962 (pink) and 1963 (cyan) should move 1 frame earlier so that there isn't an unintended colored hand and a minijack.

And folder name is now broken again (because of fixes submitted on April 19th).

Good to go, please put in-game as "Daraku no Sono".

I just realized there was a Save button above the Upload button. Submission title is now fixed.