Tribe Attacker v2
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- Perms, sync, metadata good.

- 6.453-17.653: Following each individual click with jumps is a bit overkill. Using jumps to sounds like 7.153 & 8.753 is totally justified, but 7.353, 7.753, etc. aren't really.
- Why do you follow 7.753, 10.953, and 11.753 but not 6.953, 7.953, 8.553, etc.?
- 11.653: No reason for a minijack here.
- 18.753, 19.153 are ghost notes--those 16ths are present in the first half of this polyrhythm, but not the second. However, a new instrument comes in on the 12ths starting at 18.453, so you'd be justified to make them jumps.
- 19.253-30.453: Can't say I'm a fan of the layering here either, to be honest. You use hands for kicks, but that's the only percussion you follow; the clicks from last section are omitted in favour of the synth. You follow the synth on the 8ths with jumps, but there are equally loud ones on 16ths (e.g. 20.353) which are singles--jumps would fit better and be more consistent, but you can't really do that because of the hands. What I'm saying here is that the chart is trying to focus on two things at once, and it doesn't work very well. (My suggestion would be to use jumps for heavy synth, jumps for kick, possibly hands where both occur, using minijacky patterns for synth -> synth and no minijacks for synth -> kick or vice versa.)
- 20.053: Watch column 2 anchoring.
- 21.953: Watch column 3 anchoring.
- 33.853, 34.653: I feel like this should slow down here, not speed up.
- 36.053: These flams are inconsistent with 37.253. Since they sound much less flammy than the ones at 33.053, I suggest just making this a right-handed trill so it matches 37.253.
- 38.653, 39.053: [34] jumps have been for kicks for the last two seconds and these are synth, suggest using different jump.
- 38.453-44.853: Clicks are inconsistently followed in this section.
- 51.253-57.653: This is a pretty serious contender for most awkward section I've ever played. Just using hands instead of quads would make this so much nicer; you used a hand at 57.253 and suddenly it becomes actually playable. Could downgrade hands to jumps and quads to hands in the previous section to make this nerf consistent.
- 57.953, 59.553, 64.353, etc: Missing note to brass.
- 62.653, 63.053: You didn't use jacks at 61.053.
- 66.653: You didn't use a jump at 65.053.
- 77.653-89.253: Similar to previous sections, has the same issues of unnecessary anchoring, inconsistent clicks, and imo weird layering.
- 91.153, 96.553: Shouldn't be minijacks.
- 102.653: These were 32nds at 32.053.

- Layering is fairly inconsistent, forces gross patterns (e.g. 51.253 section) and weird minijacks (e.g. pretty much anywhere there's a quad with 16ths leading into/out of it), and is rather inattentive to the song. Needs changes, but could be worked into something acceptable. [5.5/10]