Mario-chi Survivor [Hard]
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- Sync, metadata, permissions good.

- 7.304: well that's one way to start the file. These (and future instances of them) are fine, but absolutely 100% need to be framefixed before this goes into FFR.
- 12.027: why does this break the repetition?
- 17.006, 18.027: You could continue following these as jumps like you did in the intro.
- 31.687: No kick here, why the jump?
* 32.644, 120.538: nope. No hands here. Get em out.
- 38.325: hah, that's not gonna be popular, but it's fine in the scope of the chart
- 40.878, 44.964, etc.: There's an opportunity for a poly to the mario melody here.
- 73.559, 81.730: That is a *a lot* of right hand trills. Please at least reduce the 7-note ones at e.g. 74.006, 82.176.
- 93.410: Another needlessly difficult right hand pattern.
- 114.793, 118.623: More 7-note one handed trills.
- 128.878, etc.: More poly opportunities.
- 162.464: Very indistinct compared to everything else you step in the chart, recommend removing.
- 172.879: Definitely recommend cleaning this transition up; you have a trill leading into a roll/jumptrill wall, which is already rather uncomfortable, but you also have a [14] jump going into it which forces a mini-oht, which is makes it quite a bit worse.
- 176.708: Another poly opportunity.

- This file's all fine from a technical standpoint, but I have two concerns with it in particular. The first is that there are a couple difficulty spikes/needlessly hard patterns; the hands after rolls are the most egregious examples, but some parts of the jumpstream have pretty long one-handed trills in them, and given that the song runs at 235 bpm, those should definitely be broken up a bit (i.e. no more than 6-note ohts). That said, the trilly/anchory jumpstream motif is fun. My other complaint is that the file is rather static. I see that you tried to vary it up by changing the patterns throughout, but there are more significant & interesting changes you could make: for example, the Marunouchi Survivor sections allow for some 8th jumps (see 17.006 note) which are not present in the Mario section, while the Mario sections allow for polys in the jumpstream (40.878 note) which the Marunouchi sections don't have, and I feel that could add some dynamism/replayability to the chart.
[7.5/10 - CQ on *'d note.]