Angelic Jelly **9
**12.550 this burst is kinda rude even for a file like this, given the sound. You very likely have
a 3-jack on the 4 and a 2-jack on the 3 where the jack before the 4th on each is a 3-framer and 2-framer respectively, which is kinda awkward to hit
(I believe the 2-jack on 3 could even have been a 1-framer since it's 300bpm, but looking at the file data on the batch page it appears that luckily didn't happen)
It feels quite excessive to me for a sound like that.

**19.550 hmmmm...

28.440, 29 these could both be [34] jumps like you have on the 8th following, but at least (if you're trying to keep the relative volume in observation here) should share one column with the 8th imo
30.950 really enjoy the attention to detail here sharing the jump with preceding 4th
31.850 appropriate, well-timed layering change-up
45.350 not sure about this jump
**56.825 yeah these 4-jacks are quite rough. It's clear you made a special effort to isolate these hand-wise, but as it is with 3-jacks you've got a chance they end up as 225bpm minijacks straight, I haven't done the math but are these 4-jacks potentially all 225bpm jacks as well? This stuff could be a big spike Sinthasomphone-style (but larger, as the rest of the file is easier); in any case, the voice clip on the 4th is different at the end from the rest of them and I'd at least move e.g. 57.050 to a [13] if you still want to be kinda rude
61.475 missed opportunity for a minijack
69.425 ghost
74.075 on the other hand, missing
79.150 for some reason t-paz made this a 24th instead of a 16th like you have here. It may not be worth highlighting though since if you minijack this it's a potential 1-framer and the difference in 16v24 really hard to notice on 1x - up to you if you'd like to make this a 24th 2-note sequence instead of minijack
91.475 same as 61.475
105.050 this to the end is incredibly fun

This file is really fun, I enjoyed it a lot. I'm just really not sure about the burst at 12.550 and the two 4-jacks, which while may be fine for etterna/sm, on FFR ends up potentially being a shitfest. This file gets like half a bonus point for being a jack-oriented file on FFR that isn't about longjacks, but rather lots of minijacks driving the difficulty, which is rare to see in the FFR context. In that sense, I also think the file is just thematically stronger if the 4-jacks weren't there,
so the difficulty is really concentrated in minijacks and the very occasional 3-jacks, which helps to smooth out the dificulty curve some too.

After discussion with Gradiant, lifting CQ as the 4-jacks themselves are fine. I'm lifting the CQ because having decided that they are ok, the first burst isn't grounds for CQ whatsoever by itself, even though I still recommend a change, and this file is ready to go.