TC_Halogen - 8/10
- offset is good
- 32nd usage in the intro could be a little bit improved in terms of tightness; there are a couple of instances where 16th note minijacks are made and it’s not clear why there’s a separation versus not
- 17.243: not the greatest of pattern choices here thanks to the up arrow anchor
- 18.880: missing 32nds
- 27.812: doing RUDL into [DU] creates an anchor on the down arrow before the jack starts, so a bit of a tension issue there
- 29.332: missing note?
- 29.671: some more missing 32nds for hi-hats
- 37.009: another set of missing 32nds here; a bit more noticeable given that the superseding motion is 24ths
- 52.654/56.138: a bit of a stressful motion here with five consecutive notes on the right hand with a minijack feature, could probably be more refined
- 1:33.009: nice little bounce pattern here, but the connecting minijack adds a bit more strain and reduces the fluency a bit -- certainly not a dealbreaker, though
- 1:48.396: missing minijack for the melody
- 1:51.493: ^
- 1:55.170: this feels noticeably more incorrect given that there’s actually a three note repeating sound on the 4th at 1:55.364
- 2:04.074/2:04.848: not sure why the 32nds are differently spaced; if it’s a frame concern, don’t do this within the file, let us use the tools we have on our end!
- solid file; worthy of queue for me

Wiosna - 7/10
1.751 - shouldn't be 32nds
13.921 - this burst doesn't quite feel right, probably because of how the the burst to the first sound is a bit cut off. i'm not sure how you'd fix this though... you can make the first burst slower but longer to make the second burst stand out (or vice versa), but i'll leave it up to you
15.300 - can't really hear the 32nds here (nor do i think it much makes sense)
17.243 - this is a little bit mean
21.542 - ghost 32nd, wobble starts on the 16th
26.525/26.622/etc. - ghost notes, not sure about the minijack in general
29.235 - missing 24th rhythm after this 8th
32.719 - can't really hear the first 4 32nds, and the burst starting at 32.913 seems very excessive given the rest of the sounds you've layered so far. would probably make this 32nd-equivalents. 33.106 should also be 24ths.
34.074 - can probably be 32nds since the wobble is a bit long
34.848 - 32nds here are justified but i personally would like the 32nds to be a bit easier given how soft the hi-hats are
35.842 - 32nd feels a bit weird here, it's a very inaudible hi-hat if there is one, but i personally wouldn't include it. the 32nd after is fine. that said i'd probably make the 16th connect with the [23] chord rather than the 32nd because of the syllable structure of this sound
36.009 to 36.396 - this section in particular feels really weird to play through because there's a bass wobble at 36.009 up to 36.203 that wasn't followed, and i couldn't really tell what 36.348 is going to exactly. the motions being more or less the same also made it feel a bit awkward because i was expecting a repeated rhythm in this section but there wasn't.
53.235 - would probably make this a [34] because of the hidden 5-note 16th trill going on, it makes this feel really odd to hit because you haven't been using your wrist to slam the keys down and it feels a bit slippery to hit because of that
54.783 - should be a single
56.138 - would make this a bit different from [12], you don't really use a strict patterning approach for consecutive 8th syllables and this felt a bit anomalous to hit
57.229/etc. - i don't think there'd be anything wrong with making this a minijack connected to the 16th after
57.880 - missing double
58.074/etc. - definitely feels as if something more stressful would fit better here than what you currently have since this is very easy in comparison to the rest of the section
1:01.461 - missing double
1:05.816 - there should be some way of avoiding this 6-note trill on the right hand
1:07.558 - minijack collision should start on the 8th and not the 16th after
1:12.396 - there shouldn't be a minijack here connected to the 16th before it given your patterning scheme
1:32.912 - ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i get why you did this but i really don't like this, i won't ask you to change it though if you feel that this fits well.
1:48.493 - missing minijack connected to the 4th
1:50.138 - i get that it's PR but you should probably shift this away to a different column to avoid the minijack connected to the 16th because it doesn't fit well here
1:55.461 - feels like there should be a minijack connected to the 4th here (and if you do that then you shouldn't create a 3-note anchor on 1:55.170)
1:55.557 - would personally like the 32nd burst to start on a different hand so it gives the burst a better sense of discreteness
2:06.783 - shouldn't be a 32nd burst

Chart plays well and is interesting overall. I feel that you might have to nerf the longer jacks to sets of 4 too honestly but I'll let the other judge decide. CQ mostly because I would like some clarification about some of the smaller points overall.