LASTMORN
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- Perms, sync, metadata good.

- 16.232: Shaky PR here, 3144321 is more accurate.
- 20.350: There's actually some swing here, this should be at the 12th at 20.376.
- 27.431: Why the hand here and not 27.636? This is just melody while 27.636 has a snare also.
- 29.999: No jump? This is the same thing as 29.896 and you have harder jumpjack sequences later.
- 32.157: Surprised not to see a full roll here--it's totally justified, is consistent with the chart's difficulty, would actually improve the PR of the next two jumps, and you already did a smaller splitroll at 15.513.
- 34.006: This jump seems like an odd choice. There are kicks here in a 24th rhythm followed by a big synth + snare; you have a single jump to the first kick and don't acknowledge the rest, nor do you acknowledge the synth + snare which you've been following with hands before. I would personally ditch this jump in favour of one for the synth and change the patterning to reflect the kicks.
- 42.225: Misrhythm, correct rhythm is this: https://i.imgur.com/Cd0WQrv.png (I really noticed this one when playing btw)
- 55.581: 16ths are descending from here. Also, no jump to snare?
- 44.691-46.540: Shaky PR, perhaps 123 2 1 2324.
- 64.006-65.239: More PR issues.
- 70.273: Why is this a jump?
- 74.177: lmao, rude.
- 78.903: Not a repeated note, recommend column 2.
- 80.444: Not really a fan of this 24th being basically the same trill as the 16th despite going to completely different sounds and instruments.
- 89.074, 89.896: You followed the 24ths at 88.252, but not here?
- 96.472: What are these 24ths for?
- 96.677: Honestly feel like this one could deserve a hand for volume alone, up to you though.
- 111.472: I have no idea what these minijacks are for
- 113.527: 8ths are descending, not ascending.
- 116.609: 32nd burst feels like overkill here, it took me a while to even figure out what this went to.
- 120.102: Kicks are straight 12ths from here to the next beat, no 16ths involved: https://i.imgur.com/DhzhlEX.png
- 122.876: Missing note
- 123.698: Minijack to two completely different instruments, recommend [12][13] or [12][14]
- 135.924: Misrhythm; same rhythm as 42.225
- 127.705: Missing note
- 143.116: Seeing as this is significantly lower than 142.500, 2321 or 2312 might work better for these four 8ths.

This really is a unique and interesting poly-burst file. It has many minor (and some not-so-minor) technical flaws that should be fixed up before it goes in game, but once polished I think it'll be really fun and well-received. [7/10]