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CCUK :: FFR Batch Submission
ositzxz369 -
CCUK -
Venetian Snares [8 / 10]
Sept/Oct 2020
PublicPurchasedSecretEvents
Released
http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showthread.php?t=140821&page=12
Venetian Snares - is in the "Permissions List and Information v8" thread.
Simfile Folder Name
CCUK (ositzxz369)Note Count
2366Chart Length
4:07Average NPS
9.6624Estimated Difficulty
80.89
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 8
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 11 3 - 15 4 - 34Jumps
x 363
Hands
x 0
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
13 - 26.00 nps 1 Second
24 - 24.00 nps 2 Seconds
40 - 20.00 nps 5 Seconds
75 - 15.00 nps 10 Seconds
132 - 13.20 nps 30 Seconds
358 - 11.93 nps 1 Minute
669 - 11.15 nps
Color Count
x 672 (28.4%)
x 525 (22.19%)
x 0 (0%)
x 615 (25.99%)
x 2 (0.08%)
x 118 (4.99%)
x 0 (0%)
x 4 (0.17%)
x 430 (18.17%)
Posted at 5:09am on October 20th, 2020
CCUK
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- Sync is good
- 18.471: Different sound from the preceding minijack.
- 24.161: Snare is actually on the 64th after
- 27.350: Should be a jump (see 25.247)
- 35.971: Recommend removing this jump; this pattern is a little difficult for the sound imo, since this is one of the quieter sounds you step 32nd rolls to
- 42.781: Missing 16th (see 42.609)
- 56.883: Not the same as the previous jump
- 61.316: Doesn't really fit nicely in the oht imo
- 98.557: The vocal syllable is on the next 16th here
- 103.988: This trill section is cute!
- 127.868: This jump doesn't seem to fit into your structure?
* 137.350, 231.488: The rest of the chart isn't hard enough to warrant 4-note 174bpm jacks like these, particularly considering it's not really a jack file in the first place. Please break these up somehow; two minijacks would be fine, as would a 3-note jack that breaks off early, as would an OHT.
- 147.695, 152.523: Higher than the next 8th.
- 159.075: Tone changes here, it's higher than the previous 4th; you follow this at 160.799
- 176.316: Might suggest removing this jump for pattern contouring, because right now it's basically forcing a transition from a roll into an oht on the right hand.
- 178.902: Suggest removing minijack; this is a harder pattern than previous instances of this sound, but the song is less busy
* 183.902, 193.730: These are even worse offenders than 137.350 because the sounds are way softer and honestly don't really sound like jacks anyway. I'd recommend eschewing the jacks entirely and just making these descending patterns.
- 191.316: White note here?
- 197.006, etc.: This could be a neat opportunity for colour theory, switching from white to another colour for the "CCTV" sample.
- 233.471: Ghost note (also, don't have anything here at 40.368)
- On a technical level, there are really just minor one-off flaws that I could find. However, the 4-note jacks *really* need to be fixed because there's just no place for them in this file: it's not a jack file, nor is the rest of it hard enough for that type of thing to be permissible despite that. This is good to go as soon as those are fixed, though. The song is actually pretty good too. [8/10 CQ]
Posted at 12:10am on October 26th, 2020
update - applied fixes
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Hand Bias changed: 12 => 8