TC_Halogen - 5.5/10
- offset is good
- accenting in the opening could be a little bit better; some triples are used for less dominant sounds than doubles are, and there’s no indication that layering is intended to
- 9.674: minijacks are unnecessary here
- 16.155: repeated notes? at 250 BPM, these will be felt
- 30.555: this is cute
- 39.435: should be 12ths
- 46.155: not sure what the intent of this burst is; the panning back and forth between left and right speakers really doesn’t merit this
- 47.835: missing color accent? all previous “yee” instances do that
- 48.075 (and on): the triple usage gets a bit inconsistent basically from here to the end; it seems to aim to accent the heavier sounds and fuller kicks, but there are often instances where it’s missed that can easily be filled, and/or instances where triples are used for less dominant sounds
- 56.235: burst isn’t necessary here
- 1:01.335/etc: while the minijacks are consistently applied, they do not feel nice to play at all due to how intense and abrupt the stress is on the right hand -- you might be able to pull something like this off if the minijack was separate from the other layered note, but given that the sounds are different, it’s best if they’re removed as a whole
- 1:04.635: not a fan of the flams here, even if they’re aiming to accent the chopped vocals in the back, it just looks a bit sloppier having the notes separated like this
- 1:16.815: what’s with the flam here?
- 1:17.035: 12ths aren’t correct here; 8ths follow the sounds opposing the kicks much more accurately
- 1:17.835: jump usage here?
- 1:25.935: if you’re going to accent something as subtle as this percussion, it might be worthwhile to also grab the more dominant hi-hats at 1:25.335, 1:25.455, etc.
- 1:27.915: burst patterning is a bit unnecessarily tight near the end here, you’ve got some open space to prevent the 12th note minijack (reminder: at this speed, that is a 16th minijack at 187.5 BPM that can be avoided).
- 1:37.755: should be 16ths
- 1:41.415: jump feels very out of place
- 1:46.635: because a lot of the shared accents have included percussion and sampled vocals, ignoring them here feels a bit strange compared to the rest of the section
- 2:00.075: what’s with this jump sequence?
- 2:01.455: barely audible note compared to everything else you’re following
- 2:27.915: this stream at the end is really not warranted; there’s nothing to justify it within the music, but most importantly perhaps: it comes during a time when the song is actually winding down -- this is the longest sustained stream in the entire chart, despite winding things down
- follows rhythms mostly ok - there are a few instances of misrhythms; layering could use a tuneup in a few spots, though

Wiosna - 6/10
0.315 - should be a double
1.035 - should be a double
5.595 - this should be the same double as the 8ths before and after it
7.275 - should be a triple
7.755 - feel that having a triple that connects to the 8th before it is a bit much
12.735 - missing 16th
15.075 - should be a double
15.674 - should be a triple
16.395 - not sure what this 4-note anchor goes to
22.275 - if you want to keep this anchor, i'd make the anchor start on the 8th rather than the 4th
25.875 - missing note
39.435 - should be straight 12ths
46.155 - not sure what this rhythm goes to
53.595 - i don't think this really fits a 24th rhythm here
54.975 - missing 16th
56.235 - seems a bit much
59.115 - 24ths definitely feel too much here, i think 20ths would make more sense here
59.835 - should be 12ths
1:01.395 - should be a triple, also the minijack collision here is rough
1:02.355 - not sure what the 32nd burst here goes to
1:02.955/1:03.195 - i think these should be triples?
1:05.595/1:05.835 - should be triples, also not sure if you used anchoring for similar bass kicks
1:07.275 - you generally omit the last note of each burst whenever a burst ends with a hand, and i think this should be the same
1:07.515/etc - should be triples, this happens a lot
1:15.195 - not sure if the 32nd burst is justified here
1:26.955 - not sure why there's a 4-note anchor here

List of errors isn’t exhaustive. The chord use for the bass kicks is very inconsistent in general, and I think some of the bursts are a bit much here and there. Some of the minijack collisions are a bit too rough I think but that's a smaller concern, and I think some of the anchors seem very arbitrary for the most part. The chart definitely plays fine, but I think the chart has a lot of structural inconsistencies to the point where I don't think that it can be accepted.