*While the metadata in your .sm are technically correct, the name you gave the actual file is so long that it broke the ability for me to unzip the whole set of files for my batch all together, and then to even look at just the file by itself in ddream. I had to rename the .sm myself to be able to do look at the rest of my set's files or give notes on this one. On principle, this should also count towards improper file naming in the submission rules and lead to being rejected but I'll let it pass this time because first issue. Any further files where this happens will be given an immediate 0/10 score however.

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46.407 : Missing note

104.754: jump for bass kick, dropping it here not necessary given it the layout of your roll

118.219: Same as 104.754

119.045: Not a jump

121.526: Same as 104.754

123.297: Jump here a bit odd when playing. It doesn't fit with the preceding jump given those are going to strong percussive emphasis, while I do understand that there's more oomph for this sound here than the 16ths at 123.533 or 123.770. This would be a note where the note coloring you've been doing would be helpful

124.715: Not a jump

126.604: Jump here should be on the 8th above it at 126.486 instead

129.085: Every green note here should be in pairs of 2 yet only 130.044 here is getting it

With the greens at the end, I mean that the pair of two notes you have going on at 130.044 and 130.162? That happens with every green note here. There's a second sound happening at 129.572, 129.926, 130.517, or 130.871, or until whenever you're stopping the notes since the song is fading out here