ATHOTH 8**
6.887, 8.887, etc. - these are really nice places to either continue the color (192nd) motif you had going on in the first 2 notes, and/or layer in jumps. Personally I'd do both
34.721 why is this randomly a jump and not the other places where this sound happens
oh I get it, to mark the end of a phrase. cool
40.137 missing 16th
42.721, 43.054 one of these needs to move as these melodic notes are not the same
44.387 these next few notes are kinda rude patterning and pr-wise pretty ill-fitting
45.054 missing jump to the melody
51.054 33, not 23; continue your motif of kick minijacks thoroughly
FUCK this cobra commander lite "music section" dude
Can we really not omg
at least there's a point to this because there's stuff after, but ugh
like think of how the only thing anyone remembers about cobra commander is the unlistenable ending
1.10.387 there should definitely be an arrow to the start of this horseshit sound
1.13.387 and a few more arrows here to it as well
**1.17.054 am I tripping or are all the 16ths in this section completely ghosted lol? This is the same as the intro...I get that you might want a sense of chart progression here but there's other things you can do to reflect that rather than layer in ghosts

Song was super awesome EXCEPT FOR COBRA COMMANDER ENDING and I really, really like the concept of this file - you consistently make quite unique charts easily distinguishable from modern "charting meta", but in a sensible way, and that's great. It was also quite fun on a playthrough and most of the minor pointers above dissolved in the moment
I can't even ask you in good faith to cut the nonsense part out because it's rude to the integrity of the song as that isn't the ending, and the ending actually has a point

** CQ only on clarifications or fixes to the 16ths in the ending because those seem completely ghosted as far as I can tell rn, but please take a look at the rest of the notes as well.