- 2.847: Shouldn't this be a jump? Melody + kick.
- 3.029: Why is this a single?
- 3.938: PR is backwards on these jumps
- 5.756,7.575,9.023,9.393 (etc.): I think including these notes would help the chart flow better.
- 10.665: Why single?
- 17.211: Why hand?
- 18.302: This shouldn't be the same jump as 17.575 for PR reasons.
- 19.938: Jump?
- 23.393: This should be different from 24.120 for PR.
- 26.521 and other trills like this: Why does the trill start here instead of 26.393 and why does it end at 27.029 the sound doesn't end there.
- 28.120: Jump to snare? See 27.393.
- 43.938: I would include these two 8ths to make this feel less empty and to emphasize the build up.
- 46.665: Shouldn't this have a grace like 47.423?
- 46.847: Why is this a single? 47.574 is a jump.
- 47.756, 47.938: These notes have a different pitch.
- 52.483: Why hand?
- 61.392: This not being a jump really bothers me, it just doesn't feel right. I know it's subjective but the average player will not understand the layering here.
- 61.938: This should not be a [24], the previous [24]'s were snares.
- 62.847: Why are the 8th notes in this section omitted? This one in particular feels like a missing note while playing.
- 63.718: Probably omitted on purpose, but this note feels pretty important.
- 66.301: These shouldn't all be [24]'s, they're different sounds.
- Song just suddenly ends, it feels abrupt.

I don't necessarily like the layering here, it's melody + kick = jump and clap/snare = jump for the most part, but there are times where it feels really counter-intuitive and you decided to omit some notes that really shouldn't be omitted since they're such an important part of the song. I hate having to reject this chart because I can tell alot of thought went into it, but I think the chart suffers from PR issues and odd layering choices. I find the triple claps being jump -> single -> jump especially weird feeling.

Judge Score: 6.00 - Rejected