- 5.339: I don't like this being a jump, I like the previous jumps because of multiple instruments converging, but here it's just the string instrument getting louder?
- 7.696: Jump?
- 10.267: Why is this a jump as opposed to 9.839?
- 10.375: Doesn't sounds like a jack to me, I would put it on [2].
- 10.589: Why not make this a 1234 staircase with 10.910 being on [4]? It's the highest pitch. 10.910 actually sounds like it could be a jump as well.
- 22.053: This is subjective because I know it's a jump because of the string instrument converging with the bass, but I would make this a single. 22.267 and 22.482 are just so much more prominent.
- 24.410: You change your jump structure so frequently that it's really confusing, here the jumps are going to the higher frequency strings(?), while at 23.767 the jumps are going to the cello, I highly prefer you make the jump structure more intuitive here by just following the bass. So I would make 24.410 and 24.839 singles and 26.125 a jump.

- This jump thing is going to be a persistent problem for me throughout the entire file, it's really unintuitive to me due to the jump structure changing so frequently. We've discussed a bit on discord and the inconsistency in jump usage is structural enough of a problem to reject the file. I'll give it a 6.5 so you can still appeal if you change your mind and want me to give further details.

Judge Score: 6.50 - Rejected