Shinchoku Yaba-Zaemon uwu :: FFR Batch Submission
Deamerai - Shinchoku Yaba-Zaemon uwu - J-CORE SLiCER & katagiri [7.5 / 10]
OT18 Bounty Batch - Courtroom
PublicEvents
Released
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1goVL1D37TyZKlYBfER-ZIZlssHdWdq9-gLSdX6A2sII/edit?usp=sharing
Katagiri and J-CORE SLi//CER are in the v9 permission sheet. (Blanket for both)

Intended for mid 110s bounty, probably underrated because it requires a lot of skill control.

This file is a collab between the following step-artists:
Deamerai, Samctuary

- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Shinchoku Yaba Zaemon uwu (Deamerai & Samctuary)" vs "Shinchoku Yaba-Zaemon uwu (Deamerai)"

- This file is a collaboration between multiple authors / stepauthors.

Simfile Folder Name

Shinchoku Yaba Zaemon uwu (Deamerai & Samctuary)

Note Count

4556

Chart Length

4:30

Average NPS

17.5074

Estimated Difficulty

112.13

First Note

0:09

Ending Note Delay

0:04

Hand Bias

x -50

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 91 2 - 205 3 - 800 4 - 414

Jumps

x 1087

Hands

x 146

Quads

x 4

Color Jumps

x 43

Color Hands

x 8

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
13 - 39.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
17 - 34.00 nps 1 Second
30 - 30.00 nps 2 Seconds
52 - 26.00 nps 5 Seconds
120 - 24.00 nps 10 Seconds
230 - 23.00 nps 30 Seconds
649 - 21.63 nps 1 Minute
1221 - 20.35 nps

Color Count

x 1905 (41.81%)
x 1255 (27.55%)
x 27 (0.59%)
x 926 (20.32%)
x 20 (0.44%)
x 134 (2.94%)
x 24 (0.53%)
x 20 (0.44%)
x 245 (5.38%)

Largest Note Gaps

3.27s3.27s1.03s0.43s0.33s0.33s0.33s0.33s
35
28
21
14
7

Approved for low-mid 110s.

Let's see what do we get here..

Shinchoku Yaba-Zaemon uwu

- Offset's good.

7.605 - Missing 16th?
11.837 - Missing note at the start of this syllable.
17.837 - Probably shouldn't be a quad.
21.694 - Hand should be here, thematically given the accent.
33.051 - Use a different jump other than [12], it's a different accent than 32.837.
39.694 - A bit of a busy left hand-bias here after the 24th roll transition. Try [14]322? The [34] jump that you have at the start doesn't have the same accent as the next 4th jump anyway.
45.694 - It might be worthwhile to move the minijack to col.1 instead of 2, the stack feels apparent when playing this.
52.712 - The accenting on this 16th jump doesn't feel sharp enough to warrant a jump I feel. Single?
1:01.391 - Move to 3?
1:08.141 - Same as 52.712.
1:33.587 - eek. That's downright cruel for a rapid mini handjack in this break section, but alright.
2:16.873 - You might want to consider toning this down to a jump since the pattern after forces a OHT to ease up the density a little bit here. Keep in mind that 280bpm 16th OHT has been kind of the theme here, but still need to consider using them sparingly. (by sparingly, I meant the patterns before or after doesn't immediately strain you on focusing to hit them generally)
*2:24.752 - I'm not quite comfortable letting this through, to be brutally honest. It's isolated, sure, but again, 420bpm trilling is just yikes to go through. Not forcing a change, but maybe you can do something else?
2:31.658 - Move to 4?
2:46.194 - I hear this as 16ths rather than 12ths. (it might be a muddied sound so I understand why these are 12ths, but just putting it out there)
3:20.087 - Maybe use a [34] jump instead? It's a different accent than 3:20.301.
3:34.498 - Technically should be a jump.
**4:11.681 - Look, I understand this pattern, but I strongly think that we don't want to illicit a Red Vector Acid Minute situation on our hands, especially at this ending. Please make this pattern a little bit more sensible.
4:26.846 - Could use a note here since it's two syllables, you used one at the second.

This is a strong chart, and mostly fair right until the end. The staircase at the end is a troll, and while it is logical to use them, I don't think it's fair when that's the exact situation happening for Red Vector Acid Minute file and people lose their AAAs until that pattern comes. FR on that, and consider the *'d point as well. 110+ files are definitely a scarcity and this helps fit the bill for OT. [7.5*/10, Fixes Required]

Judge Score: 7.50 - Fixes Required

11.837 - Missing note at the start of this syllable.
added

21.694 - Hand should be here, thematically given the accent.
added

33.051 - Use a different jump other than [12], it's a different accent than 32.837.
okay, sure

39.694 - A bit of a busy left hand-bias here after the 24th roll transition. Try [14]322? The [34] jump that you have at the start doesn't have the same accent as the next 4th jump anyway.
slightly intentional, it's to accent the minijacks on the left, and to the right afterwards

45.694 - It might be worthwhile to move the minijack to col.1 instead of 2, the stack feels apparent when playing this.
made a different adjustment which is to move the 8th hand to [134]

52.712 + 1:08.141 - The accenting on this 16th jump doesn't feel sharp enough to warrant a jump I feel. Single?
i think it's fine.

1:33.587 - eek. That's downright cruel for a rapid mini handjack in this break section, but alright.
given the downtime in this section, i think it's fine to let that pack a punch lol

2:16.873 - You might want to consider toning this down to a jump since the pattern after forces a OHT to ease up the density a little bit here. Keep in mind that 280bpm 16th OHT has been kind of the theme here, but still need to consider using them sparingly. (by sparingly, I meant the patterns before or after doesn't immediately strain you on focusing to hit them generally)
okay, sure

*2:24.752 - I'm not quite comfortable letting this through, to be brutally honest. It's isolated, sure, but again, 420bpm trilling is just yikes to go through. Not forcing a change, but maybe you can do something else?
I could change it to a 32423, or just remove it, it was a last minute addition that i thought of adding to spice up the difficulty.

2:31.658 - Move to 4?
eh, it's relatively minor, it goes to the 'fucking' sample

3:20.087 - Maybe use a [34] jump instead? It's a different accent than 3:20.301.
sure

**4:11.681 - Look, I understand this pattern, but I strongly think that we don't want to illicit a Red Vector Acid Minute situation on our hands, especially at this ending. Please make this pattern a little bit more sensible.
fair enough, it was a random last minute experiment

Fixes

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 4559 => 4556
AVG NPS changed: 17.51889 => 17.50737
Hand Bias changed: -55 => -50

Changes are mostly good, and I like the 2:24.752 idea better than just doing 23 5-note trilling. The ending is also much more bearable to play now.

Setting this to Accepted.