8/10

sync looks fine
- 3.716 could be a hand imo. also could add the 16th after on 3.830 on col 4 to have the transition meld the 2 sections together really nicely.
- 11.731 break up this 3 note jack, rest of the 3 note jacks have gone to more prominent percussion and having extraneous 3 note jacks more makes the emphasis on those less impactful.
- 12.819 missing 32nd
- 12.876 highly recommend reworking this section to be more of a break and focused on the speeding up shortened synth notes. section as is feels very continuous even though the main pulsing synth in the bg stops here.
- 20.261 32nd should be here? idk what the 32nd jump goes to.
- 24.040 missing 32nd
- 40.586 cute patterning here
- 45.567 missing 32nd
- 48.658 same thing as 20.261
- 52.437 missing 32nd
- 56.225 recommend adding in the 32nds? here to connect with the burst after since it feels like a part of one sound
- 59.536 missing 32nd
- 1:02.628 same thing as 20.261
- k gonna stop pointing out 32nds, but they're there, plz check those
- not a big fan of the color theory but it works well enough
- 1:14.947 & 1:15.176 think these shouldn't be colored? better to stick to the really prominent melody for the colored notes imo
- 1:21.006 think this should just be a 16th
- 1:23.410 same thing as 12.876
- 1:37.322 recommend adding the 16th here
- 1:51.578 highly recommend changing this to col 3 and the 4th at 1:51.693 to col 4 to make the repetition work at 1:52.036 (this also makes this section not hell for the left hand which it currently is for ppl that barely meet the speed req)
- 1:53.525 missing 4th. i think you omitted this to fit in the patterning you wanted, but having a gap here feels super weird given whats going on in the music
- for the ending you might want to consider having the loud synth hits that youre emphasizing with jumps paired down to just singles and then having patterning enforce the idea of representing the speeding up of the synthj (like a speeding up trill). feels a bit weird to have the emphasis start off with doubles then kind of just blend into the rollwall.

looks like a lot of notes but this file is very well put-together and presents its concepts/motifs clearly. notes mentioned if applied would bump up the quality further though.

Judge Score: 8.00 - Change Recommended

- 17:170 forgot to mention this 32nd but you should prolly add it in since you added the rest.

rest of the changes look good to me. moving to accepted.