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A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1099 => 1102
AVG NPS changed: 6.21606 => 6.23303
Hand Bias changed: 3 => -2

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Caramel Pain (jh05013) [7.5/10]
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00:17.371 - missing grace note

00:28.871 - missing vocal note, There are softer vocals that get charted so this should to.

00:31.563 - The rhythm here feels off. the "K" sound feels like its coming in a lot earlier, and the "ne" feels like its a bit earlier as well.

00:36.179 - This note comes in a bit after the 8th, might be better to put in on the 12th. When you compare it to the smoothness of the 8ths at 00:36.410 its especially noticeable

00:42.717 - seems like a ghost note. Even slowing down the vocals just dont change at all except for ending so a note here doesn't make sense.

00:43.333 - surprised you didn't put a note here for the vocals.

00:44.487 - technically a missing note here.

00:49.717 - sounds like a ghost note.

00:55.179 - Feels like this note comes in later. 00:55.256 feels more accurate

00:56.102 - A few things here. First, i think its a bit rude to put a fast burst right before a jack like this. I think mirroring the 23 would be a nicer option. Second i Dont think the jacks really work. having this very soft "sh" jack into the harder "mo" really feels like a ghost note. I feel it would make more sense to either jack the first two syllables, as they are clearly a part of the same word, or jack the two harder syllables leaving the "sh" as a stream note. I think either would feel more accurate to the song.

00:59.487 - These chords feel quite out of place. I dont think they are loud enough to warrant such density in this relatively light chart. Especially when compared to other sections like 00:44.256

01:01.563 - not the biggest fan of the 16th minijack here. not impossible or anything, i just think it stands out.

01:23.179 - missing vocal note

02:17.487 - same problem as 00:56.102, though not as bad with the harsher "sh" sounds. also the triple jack doesn't feel quite as good with the "sh" in it.

02:20.717 - same issue as 00:59.487

02:21.640 - again the jacks feel out of place, but more so because 02:21.794, 02:22.717, 02:23.640 feels like a ghost note

02:31.025 - is this the only jack in the section not for vocals?

02:43.794 - man does this feel out of place not charting vocals here when they've been a focal point of the entire chart. I get why, though i do wonder if it would be better to have the spike.

Generally a good chart, but could use some polishing up. the biggest issue for me is the out of place chords.

Judge Score: 7.50 - Change Recommended

Checking in on the status of this submission, as it's past the 1 month probationary period with a "Change Recommended" flag, but there's been no acknowledgment of judge notes or fixes submitted.

Files/Songs with the "Change Recommended" tag require at a minimum a response from the Stepauthor in order to continue through the submission system.

I will check back on this at a later date. If it does not receive a response or fix by then, it could risk rejection.

I have some fixes but I'll finalize it this weekend.

a-a

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1102 => 1121
AVG NPS changed: 6.23303 => 6.3405
Hand Bias changed: -2 => -9

Thanks for the notes.
- Notes applied except 42.717 "kowai", 49.717 "ideorogi", and 2:21.640 "aishiteruyo" - each of those "i" felt audible enough to include
- 1:01.333-.679 tweaked so the minijack hand gets a bit more prep time
- 2:43.794-: I initially tried charting the vocals but it was too hard. I tried again with reduced vocals, and it seems better now.
- Also added other missing vocals