Avallonis :: FFR Batch Submission
M0nkeyz - Avallonis - The Musical Ghost [9 / 10]
OT18 Bounty Batch - Courtroom
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https://soundcloud.com/the-musical-ghost/arcaea-song-contest-4th-movement-the-musical-ghost-avallonis
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Simfile Folder Name

Avallonis (M0nkeyz)

Note Count

1568

Chart Length

2:30

Average NPS

10.7079

Estimated Difficulty

80.17

First Note

0:04

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -30

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 7 3 - 15 4 - 39

Jumps

x 387

Hands

x 41

Quads

x 1

Color Jumps

x 4

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
19 - 19.00 nps 2 Seconds
34 - 17.00 nps 5 Seconds
75 - 15.00 nps 10 Seconds
144 - 14.40 nps 30 Seconds
409 - 13.63 nps 1 Minute
764 - 12.73 nps

Color Count

x 605 (38.58%)
x 455 (29.02%)
x 10 (0.64%)
x 365 (23.28%)
x 10 (0.64%)
x 40 (2.55%)
x 15 (0.96%)
x 16 (1.02%)
x 52 (3.32%)

Largest Note Gaps

1.5s1.3s1.23s0.93s0.73s0.73s0.73s0.57s
35
28
21
14
7

You unlocked a secret bounty or something I guess...

Approving this

>Metadata, Sync, Perms OK

00:34.023=God. what a fantastic vocal flair. Definitely wouldn't have thought of doing something like this myself.
00:44.505=There's 24ths here too up until the 8th but this works as well.
00:45.228=Can barely hear this 32nd roll. It is correct. but maybe subject to remove idk.
00:57.156=Wish the background poly was layered here aww man
01:42.969=Would argue that layering here should be similar to how the 8th jump sections have been. with the jump on the 16ths & 8th singles as well. and the 192nd be single.
01:45.861=Same goes for this one.
01:54.264=Beautiful
02:11.072=Ehh. a little conflicted on this just because the hand doesn't necessarily have equivalency to the previous 4th hand since it's on a downbeat.

Fantastic song choice, Exceptional layering and very tasteful choice of patterning. Y'know, we do have The Musical Ghost blanket permissions. I now understand why Tru approved this.

LABELS below in-case you have the new version of ArrowVortex and wanna super-impose them into the file for quick reference.

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#LABELS:94.000=God. what a fantastic vocal flair. Definitely wouldn't have thought of doing something like this myself.,
123.000=There's 24ths here too up until the 8th but this works as well.,
125.000=Can barely hear this 32nd roll. It is correct. but maybe subject to remove idk.,
158.000=Wish the background poly was layered here aww man,
284.750=Would argue that layering here should be similar to how the 8th jump sections have been. with the jump on the 16ths & 8th singles as well. and the 192nd be single.,
292.750=Same goes for this one.,
316.000=Beautiful,
362.500=Ehh. a little conflicted on this just because the hand doesn't necessarily have equivalency to the previous 4th hand since it's on a downbeat.
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Judge Score: 9.00 - Accepted

34.023: You caught that :)
44.505: Kinda done this way for difficulty concerns.
57.156: I tried a bunch of different approaches, but following the percussion like this felt best for me.
102.969: Not entirely sure what you mean, but I'm mainly highlighting the things in this section that I think stand out the most.
131.072: I see what you mean, but I feel this drum fill is emphasized nicely this way.

Also going to address lights notes she sent to me in a DM

00:23.857 - Missing 32nd following the chirping. Looks intentional though.

- It's too faint and hard to notice for me to include, I find the 32nds before way more pronounced.

00:35.508 & 00:35.693 - Unclear what these notes are meant to be following. Grey trill on columns 1 and 2 into normal quantization to convey the instrument change is a nice touch, but the idea behind the note placements here isnt particularly clear.

- These are dump notes not following the percussion but rather the high pitch sound.

00:42.878 - Consider removing this 8th. It was omitted in the previous iteration @ 00:37.095 and its inclusion draws attention away from the ""16th swing"" that characterizes the section.

- Sure, removed.

00:58.782 & 02:16.855 - Missing synth note on the 8th? Is a clear continuation of the rhythm following the previous couple notes and the stream feels cut short without it.

- I'm only following the percussion here, the stream felt too continuous with the next section when following the synth.

01:02.397 -> 01:03.662 - Ignoring the 16ths rhythm in favor of following 8ths here is rather conspicuous, considering it is represented as streams @ 01:10.168 and the sound is just as intense here.

- I disagree I think the section at 1:10~ is louder.

01:18.843 - Tasteful quad.

- Thanks homie :P

01:44.867 - Patterning on the right hand is unnessecarily awkward here, would recommend shifting things around a bit to alleviate it.

- I don't think it's that bad, plus it follows PR and it's kind of symmetrical

02:17.036 - Missing 4th, ascending synth starts here. Same as 00:58.963.

- Yeah like I said, I've tried following a bunch of different elements of the song in this section and it just felt better following the percussion, following the synth made it feel too continuous with the next section to me.

File is very cool and does a great job of capturing what makes the song as energetic and interesting as it is. I'm personally a big fan of color usage and you've done so to great effect, especially in the back half of the file. Some aspects of the charting don't personally resonate with me, however the intention and purpose behind the decisions made in the file are both clear and reasonable from start to finish. ezpz acceptarooski.

- Thanks for the notes!

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1569 => 1568
AVG NPS changed: 10.71477 => 10.70794
Hand Bias changed: -29 => -30