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Target Oracle Grinder Apparatus :: FFR Batch Submission
Deamerai -
Target Oracle Grinder Apparatus -
4lung [8 / 10]
OT17 Bounty Batch
PublicEvents
Accepted
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1goVL1D37TyZKlYBfER-ZIZlssHdWdq9-gLSdX6A2sII/edit?gid=0#gid=0
4Lung blanket permission
Inspired by ositzxz369
Inspired by ositzxz369
Simfile Folder Name
Target Oracle Grinder Apparatus (Deamerai)Note Count
2260Chart Length
2:36Average NPS
15.2325Estimated Difficulty
103.96
First Note
0:08Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 60
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 2 2 - 227 3 - 75 4 - 307Jumps
x 703
Hands
x 147
Quads
x 5
Color Jumps
x 6
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second11 - 33.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
14 - 28.00 nps 1 Second
26 - 26.00 nps 2 Seconds
45 - 22.50 nps 5 Seconds
104 - 20.80 nps 10 Seconds
201 - 20.10 nps 30 Seconds
578 - 19.27 nps 1 Minute
1066 - 17.77 nps
Color Count
x 957 (42.35%)
x 696 (30.8%)
x 6 (0.27%)
x 502 (22.21%)
x 4 (0.18%)
x 33 (1.46%)
x 12 (0.53%)
x 16 (0.71%)
x 34 (1.5%)
Posted at 9:23pm on June 22nd, 2024
Approved for low-100s bounty
Posted at 9:07am on June 24th, 2024
Target Oracle Grinder Apparatus (Deamerai) [8.5/10]
PERMS OK
SYNC OK
6.181 & 7.864 & etc: Could really use these. They're quite audible and make for fun rhythms instead of just 4th pauses. Could even color them.
21.892 & 22.792 & 23.073 & 23.523 & 23.973 & 24.054: Could even add some of those honestly, although they're quite subtle so not necessary. Check the other iterations too if you add them.
27.704-28.529: Left hand is unnecessarily awkward there, especially the 121121.
38.204: This burst is a bit jank on the left hand after that 6-notes OHT. It's no big deal but 38.354 and the following 32nd could be inverted as to minimize the direction changes (12 21 12 would become 12 21 21).
40.454: Could have some roll here.
1:13.383: This is a bit awkward too; why not make this burst end with the (12)(12) and make the next set of jumpjacks the (13)(13) instead? Check 1:18.183 too.
Pretty solid chart. No major concern to note, although there is a bit of patterning that feels unnecessarily abrasive (relative to the surrounding stuff) here and there. Quite intuitive and challenging. Good stuff.
Judge Score: 8.50 - Accepted
Posted at 8:05am on July 13th, 2025
Permission good (blanket)
Sync good enough
** Contrary to the v9 sheet, 4lung should be lowercase.
Needs an Explicit tag? Apparently it contains explicit lyrics according to the YouTube upload, and it's marked as R-19 on Spotify, but I can't understand any line of the lyrics...
- 37.904-38.504: ow that left hand. It's manip-able though
- 44.692, 49.492, 54.292: missing
- 45.854-46.004: same sound as 50.654-50.804, etc.
- 1:05.508, 1:10.308: jump
- 1:13.458, 1:18.258: quite tricky one-hands compared to the surrounding patterns (but then again, harder stuff lies ahead anyway, so I guess it's fine?)
- 1:35.508: missing (synth)
- 2:23.950-2:33.400: the sound that corresponds to the last 3 jumps is present throughout this section; I think 2:32.350 is worth including at least since it's the last measure
- 2:32.725: missing
Nice friendly jumpgluts compared to what the estimator may suggest, though they also get more challenging as you progress, interesting stuff. FR on musician name.
Judge Score: 7.50 - Fixes Required
Posted at 1:10am on July 14th, 2025
Not gonna lie, FRing my file over minor artist capitalization is pretty extreme, but I'll get to it.
Posted at 11:38am on July 16th, 2025
Oppie:
00:06.181 & 00:07.864 & etc: Could really use these. They're quite audible and make for fun rhythms instead of just 4th pauses. Could even color them.
subtle on 1.0x, not really necessary
00:21.892 & 00:22.792 & 00:23.073 & 00:23.523 & 00:23.973 & 00:24.054: Could even add some of those honestly, although they're quite subtle so not necessary. Check the other iterations too if you add them.
no lol
00:27.704-00:28.529: Left hand is unnecessarily awkward there, especially the 121121.
sure, changed
00:40.454: Could have some roll here.
hmm, i can see the vision here. maybe? it would break the flow a bit though
jh:
- 44.692, 49.492, 54.292: missing
intentional - its to minimize the awkwardness in the bursts here
- 45.854-46.004: same sound as 50.654-50.804, etc.
fixed
- 1:05.508, 1:10.308: jump
why jump here? i'm representing the cymbal as a single note since it's abrupt.
- 1:13.458, 1:18.258: quite tricky one-hands compared to the surrounding patterns (but then again, harder stuff lies ahead anyway, so I guess it's fine?)
debating whether to change this so the jumps would be only on 34 or not, but i'm not sure if that would benefit the pattern, because then i have to change the 4th note afterwards and it'd be more awkward on the middle columns imo
- 1:35.508: missing (synth)
i think i removed that to minimize the harshness of the jumpjacks
- 2:23.950-2:33.400: the sound that corresponds to the last 3 jumps is present throughout this section; I think 2:32.350 is worth including at least since it's the last measure
if i understood this correctly, done?
- 2:32.725: missing
added
Posted at 11:40am on July 16th, 2025
Fixes
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Artist changed: 4Lung => 4lung
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Note Count changed: 2256 => 2260
AVG NPS changed: 15.20557 => 15.23253
Hand Bias changed: 58 => 60
Posted at 7:21am on July 17th, 2025
Accepted - I just thought it was still a part of the metadata fix, sorry if it's not the case.