Pastel Express :: FFR Batch Submission
jacobvl39 - Pastel Express - Cynax [7.25 / 10]
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Simfile Folder Name

Pastel Express (jacobvl39)

Note Count

1703

Chart Length

2:37

Average NPS

11.1017

Estimated Difficulty

77.81

First Note

0:04

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -11

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 5 3 - 6 4 - 23

Jumps

x 353

Hands

x 20

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 3

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
21 - 21.00 nps 2 Seconds
38 - 19.00 nps 5 Seconds
83 - 16.60 nps 10 Seconds
159 - 15.90 nps 30 Seconds
446 - 14.87 nps 1 Minute
778 - 12.97 nps

Color Count

x 621 (36.47%)
x 409 (24.02%)
x 27 (1.59%)
x 552 (32.41%)
x 9 (0.53%)
x 75 (4.4%)
x 3 (0.18%)
x 7 (0.41%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

1.93s1.23s0.7s0.53s0.47s0.43s0.37s0.37s
35
28
21
14
7

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1692 => 1702
AVG NPS changed: 11.02999 => 11.09518
Hand Bias changed: -18 => -16

Pastel Express (jacobvl39) [7/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

3.499 - Sounds closer to 3.565
4.249 - Sounds closer to 4.271
4.955 - Sounds closer to 4.977
5.308 - Sounds closer to 5.330
7.558 - Ghost note
7.646 - Why is this jump, but not 7.469?
8.881 - Should be jump? Compare 8.175/8.528
10.822 - Should be jump
12.763/etc - No hand for CymbalCrash? That's fine
15.146 - Are you stepping the piano here in this section? If so, then you missed 15.278
22.602 - Ghost note
27.940 - Should be jump
36.763-36.940 - What noise made you change jumptrill patterns here?
39.822/40.058 - Why jump?
40.999-41.175 - Should be 24ths in here
44.087-44.263 - Can you do 3[24][13] here to be consistent w/ the [13] on 43.822?
47.440 - Missing note
49.028 - Same jump pattern, but diff instrument than 48.763? (kick vs. snare)
52.469/52.602 - Ghost note
55.116 - Same jump pattern, but diff instrument than 54.763? (snare vs. kick)
57.852 - This should be jump, not 57.763. Percussion
1:03.058-1:03.234 - Shouldn't this be a jumptrill?
1:08.616 - Missing note
1:14.837 - Sounds closer to 1:14.859
1:23.087 - Should be jump. Snare
1:31.293 - Ghost note
1:33.999-1:34.058 - These two notes are actually 32nds of 1:34.028/1:34.072
1:36.058 - I suggest changing this to [14] b/c it'd be better PR leading up to 1:36.587
1:43.558 - Missing note
1:47.087 - Missing note
1:47.616 - Ghost note (in terms of what you're stepping in this part)
1:48.455 - Missing note
1:54.631 - Ghost note. Also there's 24ths between 1:54.587-1:54.763
1:56.925/1:57.146 - Missing note
2:02.793/2:03.058 - Ghost note (in terms of what you're stepping in this part)
2:03.587 - Maybe change this to a Single to differentiate it from the upcoming [12] snares?
2:08.263 - Sounds closer to 2:08.308
2:12.499 - Ghost note (in terms of what you're stepping in this part)
2:13.146-2:13.381 - These three notes are late by a 48th (sounds closer to 2:13.116/2:13.234/2:13.352 respectively)
2:18.763-2:18.940 - Would be better if this was a jumptrill
2:23.881/2:24.940/2:27.322 - Ghost note (in terms of what you're stepping in this part)
2:33.058-2:33.146 - Maybe make these two kicks into a [1] minijack so that it'd differentiate from the melody

>>Straightforward & kinda consistent

Judge Score: 7.00 - Change Recommended

Pastel Express (jacobvl39)
>Permission good (Blanket)
>Folder contents, metadata good
>Sync good

5.616 - (subjective-ish) suggest move to .646
10.822 - jump, kick/piano/horn
22.602 - don’t hear this 32nd, is it for flow or structure?
44.263 - jump
1:20.705, (arguably) 1:21.852 - ghost, you don’t appear to be following hi-hats in this section
1:31.293 - ghost
1:47.616 - ghost
1:58.558 - imo the piano grace thing is too prominent to miss, I’d just move this note a 32nd later

This chart is loads of fun. Needs a bit of clean up but will be a solid addition to the game.

Judge Score: 7.50 - Change Recommended

Checking in on the status of this submission, as it's past the 1 month probationary period with a "Change Recommended" flag, but there's been no acknowledgment of judge notes or fixes submitted.

Files/Songs with the "Change Recommended" tag require at a minimum a response from the Stepauthor in order to continue through the submission system.

I will check back on this at a later date. If it does not receive a response or fix by then, it could risk rejection.

Ping because got the 'working on it' update, but we're nearly 4 months later on this.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1702 => 1703
AVG NPS changed: 11.09518 => 11.10169
Hand Bias changed: -16 => -11

Thanks for your patience. Final version of the chart has been uploaded based on the judge suggestions.