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Dedication Page :: FFR Batch Submission
gold stinger -
Dedication Page -
Onefin [7 / 10]
17th Official Tournament
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Rejected
Onefin blanket perms as per v9 spreadsheet
sub back in from bounty batch.
Was ok with cutting intro & ending for time but a full minute into the song was a bit much for my taste and I do agree it's a little spiky so oh well, there's plenty of good other low 70 bounty batch options.
It can go here in the meantime.
Was ok with cutting intro & ending for time but a full minute into the song was a bit much for my taste and I do agree it's a little spiky so oh well, there's plenty of good other low 70 bounty batch options.
It can go here in the meantime.
Simfile Folder Name
Dedication Page (gold stinger)Note Count
1557Chart Length
3:09Average NPS
8.5299Estimated Difficulty
69.56
First Note
0:06Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -13
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 5 4 - 40Jumps
x 353
Hands
x 44
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 4
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second7 - 21.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
17 - 17.00 nps 2 Seconds
31 - 15.50 nps 5 Seconds
72 - 14.40 nps 10 Seconds
133 - 13.30 nps 30 Seconds
354 - 11.80 nps 1 Minute
683 - 11.38 nps
Color Count
x 681 (43.74%)
x 39 (2.5%)
x 679 (43.61%)
x 38 (2.44%)
x 58 (3.73%)
x 4 (0.26%)
x 55 (3.53%)
x 0 (0%)
x 3 (0.19%)
Posted at 8:39pm on June 29th, 2024
Dedication Page (gold stinger) [7/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
4.622 - Sounds closer to 4.702
21.997-22.893 - Are you sure there's notes present throughout this part? If so, then some of the noises are really subtle
30.733 - Why no minijack w/ 30.622? Nothing in the background that would warrant PR. See also 41.288-41.400
32.177 - Missing note. BackgroundMelody. Compare 28.511
38.788 - Missing note
46.511 - Same jump pattern as 46.177, but has diff pitch?
48.066 - Same jump pattern as 47.511, but has diff instrument? (snare vs. kick)
48.511-48.844 - Technically diff pitches on these kicks, but I guess you're avoiding jumpgluts throughout the file?
52.282/54.177 - Missing note. BackgroundMelody
54.844 - Should be jump. Compare 49.511
56.955 - Why jump? No percussion
58.511-58.955 - Technically the pitch is descending
58.622 - Same jump pattern as 58.511, but has diff pitch?
1:00.955/1:02.948 - Missing note. BackgroundMelody
1:05.511 - Should be jump
1:09.844 - Should be hand. CymbalCrash (doesn't matter whether or not it's integrated into the grace note)
1:30.955 - Why jump? No percussion
1:31.844 - If you're going to add a jump (1:36.511) at the end of this solo, then you might as well add a jump at the start
1:37.177/1:39.622/1:44.955/1:45.177/1:46.844/1:47.844 - Should be jump
1:49.955 - Why jump?
1:50.400/1:50.455 - Ghost note
1:50.511/1:50.622 - Should be jump
1:52.622 - Maybe hand
1:52.955 - Why jump?
2:04.177/2:04.844/2:05.177/2:07.177/2:08.844/2:09.844/2:10.177/2:12.177/2:14.511 - Should be jump
2:12.622/2:13.066 - Should be hand. Compare 2:07.955-2:08.400
2:14.844 - Should be the same hand pattern as 2:14.622/2:15.066
2:16.288-2:16.511 - Maybe step the chimes within this section
2:17.622/2:18.511/2:18.955 - Should be hand
2:20.177 - Should be jump
2:20.288-2:20.955 - There's a grace note to this noise now. Maybe do Jump + Grace Note to make it equal to Hands?
2:25.288 - Should be hand
2:32.955 - Why jump?
2:44.955 - Should be hand
2:48.288 - Should be jump
>>Straightforward & kinda consistent
Judge Score: 7.00 - Change Recommended
Posted at 11:36pm on August 23rd, 2024
Dedication Page (gold stinger)
>Permission good (Blanket)
>Folder contents, metadata good
>Sync good
12.726 - might want a note here-ish
17.698 - this grace is so subtle that I think it should just be a single
54.177 - Missing, given 55.177 shows you’re following the background synth here
57.288 - not hearing a flam here
1:02.844 - flam?
1:05.511 - jump
1:12.511 - flam/burst? Compare 1:13.511 etc.
1:31.844 - 1:36.622 - Going to guess that the recolorizer may have messed with the sync here a bit. Some of these notes in the first part of this are quite a bit off. Of course, I’m also assuming your intention is to be very accurate here.
This would be my proposed rhythm tweaks (original on left, proposed on right. Proposed patterns are kind of random)
-1:36.122 - move to .094
1:37.177 - jump
1:45.177 - jump
1:46.844 - jump
1:47.288, .622 - (subjective-ish) not jump
1:47.844 - jump
1:50.400, .455, (subjective) .566 - ghosts
2:00.066 - no note here?
2:04.844 - jump
2:25.288 - 2:29.955 - this section is pretty cool
2:46.177 - (subjective) flam?
2:48.288 - jump
A lot of little cleanup, but this plays fairly well. Spikes aren't too bad and it's a pretty cool chart overall. CR - still think you should do some work on this.
Judge Score: 7.00 - Change Recommended
Posted at 11:48pm on February 4th, 2025
Checking in on the status of this submission, as it's past the 1 month probationary period with a "Change Recommended" flag, but there's been no acknowledgment of judge notes or fixes submitted.
Files/Songs with the "Change Recommended" tag require at a minimum a response from the Stepauthor in order to continue through the submission system.
I will check back on this at a later date. If it does not receive a response or fix by then, it could risk rejection.
Posted at 1:35pm on May 4th, 2025
Rejection via no response / fix submitted.