Savory Treat :: FFR Batch Submission
17th Official Tournament
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Simfile Folder Name
Savory Treat (Omega Link46)
Note Count
331
Chart Length
1:24
Average NPS
4.1358
Estimated Difficulty
24.87
First Note
0:04
Ending Note Delay
0:01
Hand Bias
Framers
0 - 0
1 - 0
2 - 0
3 - 0
4 - 1
Jumps
Hands
Quads
Color Jumps
Color Hands
Color Quads
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second
4 - 12.00 nps
0.5 Seconds
5 - 10.00 nps
1 Second
8 - 8.00 nps
2 Seconds
12 - 6.00 nps
5 Seconds
24 - 4.80 nps
10 Seconds
44 - 4.40 nps
30 Seconds
127 - 4.23 nps
1 Minute
251 - 4.18 nps
Color Count
Largest Note Gaps
1.1s1.1s0.57s0.57s0.57s0.57s0.57s0.57s
Posted at 2:29pm on August 10th, 2024
Savory Treat (Omega Link46)
>Permission good (HOYO)
>Folder contents, metadata good
>Sync good
30.808, 33.586, 35.697, 57.474 (subjective, can ignore) - eeeehhhhhhh… I’m not a huge fan of these being singles instead of jumps, it doesn’t reflect the instrument well. It appears to have been done for difficulty control which is okay. Kind of conflicted - it’s fine as is.
1:04.974, 1:07.474, 1:13.863, 1:16.363 - highly suggest shuffling around these 8th “minijacks” for a better PR feel with melody
1:21.086 - (subjective, can ignore) Might want this as a jump
Decent short and sweet chart. Needs some minor tweaks so giving this a CR-level rating.
Judge Score: 7.00 - Change Recommended
Posted at 7:15am on August 27th, 2024
Savory Treat (Omega Link46)
- Offset's fine.
1.849 - Technically it's missing a 48th for the guitar squeak. (happens a few times in other similar iterations)
9.974 - Fits more as a low note, so should be on the left column. (column 1)
10.808 - PR for this note and the next 4th should be mirrored. (2, then 3)
16.919 - Missing note.
18.863 - Same as 9.974.
20.391~21.086 - Should be mirrored, this doesn't reflect the PR well.
23.030 - Incorrect PR, should be high to low (I'm saying this should be mirrored).
24.141 - ^
25.808 - Missing note.
30.808 - Should be a jump. (also applies to 33.586 and 34.697)
41.919 - Also incorrect PR, should be mirrored.
57.474 - Should be a jump. (applies to 1:01.363)
A lot of PR in this file is pretty much incorrect - I noticed you're mirroring for the sake of variety so it doesn't get very repetitive, but unfortunately this counts as the song is very much repetitive. Some of the 8ths in this file are also missing in the last quarter of the file, so check that too.
The notes here are not exhaustive - but I think you get the idea. It's nice to see someone is also submitting HOYO-MiX songs to FFR, but this needs further work and carefully planned as not all of them work, and this one is pretty close to be acceptable. Given the song is repetitive, I highly expect to take all of the notes and apply them, as these errors do stack up and can become egregious as time goes on. [6/10]
Judge Score: 6.00 - Rejected
Posted at 8:08pm on August 27th, 2024
Thank you very much for the advice and the comments, everyone!