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Abendo :: FFR Batch Submission
WirryWoo -
Abendo -
r [6.25 / 10]
Winter 2023 Seasonal Batch
PublicEvents
Rejected
https://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=More_def&num=426&event=133
Simfile Folder Name
Abendo (WirryWoo)Note Count
1353Chart Length
2:16Average NPS
10.4157Estimated Difficulty
77.21
First Note
0:07Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 17
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 4 3 - 50 4 - 24Jumps
x 298
Hands
x 32
Quads
x 2
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
19 - 19.00 nps 2 Seconds
32 - 16.00 nps 5 Seconds
71 - 14.20 nps 10 Seconds
135 - 13.50 nps 30 Seconds
383 - 12.77 nps 1 Minute
719 - 11.98 nps
Color Count
x 506 (37.4%)
x 306 (22.62%)
x 101 (7.46%)
x 336 (24.83%)
x 27 (2%)
x 65 (4.8%)
x 7 (0.52%)
x 5 (0.37%)
x 0 (0%)
Posted at 1:07pm on May 6th, 2024
Abendo (WirryWoo) [6/10]
PERMS OK
SYNC OK
Why the 4 full seconds of nothing at the start?
6.665 & 6.713: Missing notes.
9.133-18.423: This entire section is actually 64th swing, not 16ths. (Notes below disregard that for simplicity).
10.197: Missing guitar note. Same for 13.294.
11.746: Seems clearly higher pitched than the previous note, not sure why minijack here.
24.230: There's a big lack of contrast between this roll and 21.907 which go to completely different sound. One of them should be at the very least a different roll.
33.036: Similar issue here where there's this rolly triplet 32nds to the guitar right after 31.971 where the wub abstraction is the same pattern essentially. Watch out for representation issues when doing these abstractions otherwise it becomes blurry and vague.
52.391: 24ths here from the 8th, not 32nds.
59.998: Possibly a 32nd here, clearer at full speed although debatable.
1:00.859: No flam here?
1:06.230-1:06.423: Wrong quantizations. It should be a 48th at 1:06.197 and then the 8th, and then a 16th.
1:22.294: Why the anchor on col 2?
1:24.423 & 1:24.552: Missing notes. Same at 1:27.520 and 1:30.584.
1:25.649 & 1:26.036: Why suddenly omitting those? Sure they're more subtle but 1:26.810 for example is too.
1:32.617: A clear one missing.
1:36.230-2:05.068: The 16ths usage in this full section is very unclear. There are super subtle notes added in semi-arbitrarily, which makes for strange playfeel when trying to figure out which such hihats make sense or not. For example 1:36.907 & 1:38.455 & 1:39.230 are all quiet hihats that are layered, but then 1:37.681, 1:38.165, 1:42.326, etc also are these same (or similar) hihats but they're omitted. Moreover, the jumps layering seems to start with a jump to [melody] or [snare], but then 1:37.391 is just a kick whereas 1:37.584 is [kick + melody] yet they're both a (23). Similar issue at 1:42.230. Then at 1:43.584 that jump is actually not there. Many inconsistencies.
Pretty fun varied rhythms in general. Unfortunately, there is a notable amount of noticeable issues that hinder the chart in multiple sections. As is, the chart feels a bit rough and inconsistent for the most part and would really benefit from a thorough cleanup. Has great potential though given the song's variety and progression.
Judge Score: 6.00 - Rejected
Posted at 12:23pm on May 8th, 2024
Abendo (WirryWoo) [6.5/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
9.133-13.778 - You might wanna recheck the PR on the pairs of 16ths. Some of the pairs have same pitch, and some pairs have diff pitch
11.746 - Should be [3]. There's no guitar minijack noise
18.100 - If this is for the guitar, then it's closer to 18.133
19.197-19.875 - This mini-jumpjack pattern is focused on the kicks, but it doesn't take PR into account. Consider doing one jumptrill pattern for the flute pitch on 19.197, and then another jumptrill pattern for the other flute pitch on 19.584
20.552-20.842 - Consider changing this pattern to 22[134][134]. This differentiates the minijack noise between 20.165-20.262 & 20.552-20.649, and fixes the PR between 20.746-20.842 & 21.036
22.875-22.923/etc - Feel like this should be a 4-note 32nd trill since this noise lasts longer than 22.681-22.778
28.488-28.681 - This is the pattern I expected on the 16ths that don't have an attack/clear noise to them. Compare 22.391/22.939/25.488/27.036
29.649 - Fix PR. Has a diff pitch than 29.455
30.810-30.955 - Same noise, but diff steps? Compare 24.617-24.713 (32nd triplet vs. 32nd flam)
31.681/34.778 - Shouldn't be part of the jack
32.939 - Missing note
35.068 - Why does the same noise get 48ths here, but get 32nds at 22.681?
36.520 - No wubs on this one?
39.326 - Shouldn't be part of the jack
43.778 - Should be on [4]
47.842-48.133 - What are these notes going to?
1:01.004 - Should be jump. Kick
1:01.488 - This should be jump, not 1:01.583
1:03.971-1:04.036 - This is technically two 32nds (1:04.004/1:04.052)
1:05.068 - Why jump?
1:06.133-1:06.375 - If this is for the guitar solo, then you're way off-sync here
1:11.326 - Missing note
1:11.455-1:13.004 - Please recheck sync on this section
1:22.294/1:22.552 - Why jump? No Clap
1:24.423/1:26.117/1:27.520/1:28.810/1:30.617/1:31.520/1:31.907/1:32.617 - Missing note
1:34.165 - Why not jump?
1:36.230-2:04.391 - Recheck this section. Jumps = Melody, Kicks, and Snare? If so, then you're inconsistent on it. Also what are the yellow 16ths going to?
>>The snaps on these wubs are used more for differentiating wub noises and less on expressing the noise's intensity. Since I'm not a wubdump expert, I'll focus more on PR, Layering, and Consistency. Yep, those three things still need work
Judge Score: 6.50 - Rejected