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Mori032Derevo230Mori :: FFR Batch Submission
ositzxz369 -
Mori032Derevo230Mori -
Ancient Origin [8.5 / 10]
Winter 2023 Seasonal Batch
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Trying to avoid using 32nds in order to increase pattern diversity. Lil Kevo 303/Ancient Origin - is in the "FlashFlashRevolution v9 Permissions Spreadsheet". Author requested this song to be under Ancient Origin (and not Lil Kevo 303)
✔️ The stepauthor has acknowledged the judges notes.
✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.
Simfile Folder Name
Mori032Derevo230Mori (ositzxz369)Note Count
1375Chart Length
2:07Average NPS
11.0235Estimated Difficulty
87.42
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -39
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 12 3 - 41 4 - 310Jumps
x 115
Hands
x 16
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
13 - 26.00 nps 1 Second
23 - 23.00 nps 2 Seconds
40 - 20.00 nps 5 Seconds
85 - 17.00 nps 10 Seconds
159 - 15.90 nps 30 Seconds
451 - 15.03 nps 1 Minute
756 - 12.60 nps
Color Count
x 550 (40%)
x 278 (20.22%)
x 90 (6.55%)
x 290 (21.09%)
x 45 (3.27%)
x 42 (3.05%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 80 (5.82%)
Posted at 11:00am on February 24th, 2024
Forest (ositzxz369) [8/10]
PERMS OK
SYNC OK
23.058: Could use a jump here for the loud chord as it's isolated enough from the rest of the strict layering.
47.058: Weird PR to have this on the right hand and 47.319 on the left.
47.580: The patterning of the 24ths is nice on its own, but this (14) transition makes it quite unpleasant because it forces a 5-notes OHT into it. It's not tooo bad but if you can come up with anything that allows a 4-notes OHT that would be better. See other iterations too.
45.036: Seems to be a missing note given your layering, see other iterations too.
1:06.297: Missing. Maybe needs to be a minijack too given 1:14.645.
1:15.428: Fine but it's preeetty subtle and you did omit some other subtle drums like the hihat on 53.515 earlier. 45.036 had a hint of a kick over it hence why the missing note but yeah, would omit this. See also 1:23.775.
1:16.275: Pretty subtle for this. There's a clear bump up in volume on the 8th for that burst; maybe consider starting the 24ths there instead. Ndb though. Same for 1:24.623.
1:20.449: Weird PR on this burst.
1:56.841: Ghost note, way too subtle.
1:57.623: Missing note, still pretty clear despite the loud reverb. Same for 2:01.797.
2:03.819: Way too clear to omit these 16ths.
Super fun chart. The layering and patterning goes well with the crisp rhythms. Some minor concerns with the relevance/intensity of some ghost/missing notes but aside from that it's pretty clean. Good job.
Posted at 11:01am on February 24th, 2024
Forest (ositzxz369) [9/10]
- Perms, metadata, sync are good
29.319-32.971, etc - This is relatively tricky, kind of transitions awkward. I imagine many people will trip on these sections
*47.580-48.102, 55.928-56.449 - Suggesting to smooth up the triplet pattern since they're a bit more difficult here
1:06.297 - Missing note
1:56.841 - Not worth representing, ghost note
1:57.623, 2:01.797, 2:03.819-2:03.949 - Missing notes
In the words of yourself: Straightforward & consistent.
Posted at 1:17pm on February 24th, 2024
For OP~
23.058 - Added
45.036/etc - Added
47.058 - While the 4343 has a lower pitch than the 1212, I'm still keeping it out of ergonomics and that the PR still goes descend-ascend
47.580/etc - To avoid the 5-OHT issue, how about I turn 47.580-47.623/etc from [14]3 to [34]1?
1:06.297 - What missing note? Also no minijack here. 1:14.645 only got a minijack b/c there's an audible 2-note hi-hat noise
1:15.428/etc - Nothing on 53.515
1:16.275 - I do notice the volume increase, but I'm keeping the pattern with the hope that the 124 pattern of 1:16.449-1:16.536 expresses that volume increase
1:20.449 - Gotta utilize the 32nds, yet also try not to do 1234 like the previous roll to differentiate the noise
1:56.841 - Removed
1:57.623/etc - No hi-hat here, unless you're talking about the reverb (which is too subtle tbh)
2:03.819 - Too subtle, overshadowed by the loud snare
For Deam~
29.319-32.971/etc - Perhaps do 14 trills instead of 13? If not, then please suggest alternative
47.580/etc - See comment on OP's side. If still not satisfactory, then please suggest another triplet pattern that is different from 48.623-49.058/etc
1:06.297 - What noise is this missing note?
1:56.841 - Removed
1:57.623/etc - See comment on OP's side
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1368 => 1370
AVG NPS changed: 10.9674 => 10.98343
Hand Bias changed: -32 => -34
Posted at 9:12pm on March 22nd, 2024
Changed song title to "Mori032Derevo230Mori" as per Lil Kevo 303's direct request, and credited as-such to "Ancient Origin".
Posted at 2:11am on March 23rd, 2024
29.319-32.971/etc - Sure, could try doing 14 trills instead of 13
1:06.297 - The hi-hat that is the same as the 4th, compare with 1:14.645
1:57.623/etc - Yes there are hi-hats there and they are very noticable despite the large reverb kick. It's not subtle as you think it is
Posted at 5:30am on March 23rd, 2024
Did 14 trills on 29.319-32.971/etc. Dunno if this is AudioHardware-related, but I still hold my previous opinion on 1:06.297 & 1:57.623/etc
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Title changed: Forest => Mori032Derevo230Mori
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Hand Bias changed: -34 => -38
Posted at 6:01am on March 23rd, 2024
Notes 1:06.297, 1:57.623/etc + Op's 2:03.819 still stand in this chart. They're very audible & noticable. The fact that you have two judges tell you this probably means that the opinion is similar. If need be go consult with other judges about these notes.
Posted at 3:36pm on March 23rd, 2024
I went from Mono stepper to Stereo stepper
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1370 => 1375
AVG NPS changed: 10.98343 => 11.02352
Hand Bias changed: -38 => -39
Posted at 4:30pm on March 23rd, 2024
this will be remembered in FFR history