New York Back Raise :: FFR Batch Submission
TheTrueXfish - New York Back Raise - saaa, kei_iwata, stuv & wakadori [5.75 / 10]
Winter 2023 Seasonal Batch
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Rejected
The song was released under BMS of Fighters - https://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=More_def&num=1&event=140
Already submitted in OT batch, but got rejected. Now I'm back with a way more coherent file (at least I feel so) to try again to get this song in game! I checked all the judges notes and fixed what was wrong.
I feel much confident in this file this time around.

Simfile Folder Name

New York Back Raise (TheTrueXfish)

Note Count

1556

Chart Length

2:31

Average NPS

10.6551

Estimated Difficulty

80.75

First Note

0:05

Ending Note Delay

0:04

Hand Bias

x -16

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 10 3 - 53 4 - 92

Jumps

x 362

Hands

x 74

Quads

x 1

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
22 - 22.00 nps 2 Seconds
40 - 20.00 nps 5 Seconds
87 - 17.40 nps 10 Seconds
164 - 16.40 nps 30 Seconds
431 - 14.37 nps 1 Minute
692 - 11.53 nps

Color Count

x 619 (39.78%)
x 285 (18.32%)
x 221 (14.2%)
x 358 (23.01%)
x 32 (2.06%)
x 41 (2.63%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

3.83s2.7s1.5s1.37s0.73s0.63s0.57s0.4s
35
28
21
14
7

5.5/10

Permission: good
Metadata: good
Sync: good

- 4.731: Bit nitpicky, but this should only jack with the 4th, so the way you have it right now I would put it on [4] and move 4.918 to [12], 4.918 is also lower in pitch than the 4th before it.
- 5.293: If you're highlighting the chords with jumps, this should be a jump. If you're highlighting the kicks with jumps 5.106 should be a jump.
- 5.574: The jump should be on the 16th if you're following the chords.
- 8.106: Again same as 5.293, this is fine as a single if you're following the chords, but 8.293 is a single as well. (also see 8.574, 8.856)
- 10.918: Why jumps?
- 11.199: Missing 16th + 32nd?
- 12.231: Here you are following the chords..
- 13.731: Why jump? See 7.731.
- 21.746: Ghost note.
- 32.902: Missing note.
- 35.902: Missing note.
- 38.434 - 38.621: Missing notes.
- 43.449: Missing jack. (congruent with the rest of your patterns)
- 48.699: Should jack as well.
***63.043 - 67.074: This section is pretty complicated, but all these notes are mistimed, the correct timestamps are: 63.324 -> 63.418, 63.699, 63.980 -> 64.262 -> 64.418 (yes it's a 12th) -> 64.543 -> 64.824, 64.918, 65.199, 65.480 -> 65.762 -> 65.949, 66.043 -> 66.324 -> 66.418, 66.512 -> 66.699, 66.793 -> 66.980 -> 67.074.
- 74.796: Hand worthy imo.
- 74.796 - 88.421: I find this and the next section a bit too heavily layered for the sound, maybe it's because there are so many jumps to the inaudible kick or the hands to the powerchords, but it almost feels dumpy to me.
- 107.510 - 118.291: There are alot of missing notes here, I get you're trying to only step the higher pitched notes, but it's not really conducive to the music.
- 120.166 - 133.291: I have a really hard time following what you're stepping here, my guess is the piano, but the pitch is hardly followed at all.

Some sections in this chart are definitely acceptable, but I feel there are too many technical errors for this to be acceptable as a whole for FFR.

New York Back Raise (TheTrueXfish) [6/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

8.480: Why omit this if 5.480 is there?

10.449: What does this go to? It doesn't seem consistent with the layering so far.

10.918: PR, shouldnt be the same as 9.418 for example.

11.386: These 16ths are quite unintuitive so far already. Why this and not 12.136? or 12.886 or 14.386 etc.

12.699: Missing note, kick.

12.418 & 12.605 & 12.980 & 13.355 & 13.730: Why is this layered with vocals, the section doesn't chart these vocals up to 14.855 where they seem to be introduced (vocals change tone a bit there too). See 4.730 which is correct.

20.011: Bit odd approximation, the vocals are much closer to the 12th here so this feels rushed.

21.746: Ghost note, or too subtle.

29.949: Ghost note.

35.714: Ghost note.

38.527: Why nothing around here??

48.371: Ghost note.

59.480: Missing note.

1:32.972: This should probably be a 48th at 1:33.002, same for the next iterations.

1:47.885: Ghost note.

1:48.072: Missing note.

1:50.978: Missing note.

1:51.072: Missing note.

1:47.510-ending: This entire section is quite inaccurate and inconsistent. Many missing 16ths to the melody.

It's a cute chart, midsection brings rhythm variety which is nice. However, there are too many inconsistencies as is to warrant a simple FR. The entire ending section must be rechecked and fixed to make the layering more coherent.