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jh05013 - Heartbreak Furry Fandom - Yuuyu [7.5 / 10]
Winter 2023 Seasonal Batch
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The song is so good that I just had to chart it.

✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.

Simfile Folder Name

Heartbreak Furry Fandom (jh05013)

Note Count

2282

Chart Length

2:41

Average NPS

14.4309

Estimated Difficulty

93.34

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

No Bias

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 32 3 - 55 4 - 44

Jumps

x 438

Hands

x 89

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 2

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
24 - 24.00 nps 2 Seconds
42 - 21.00 nps 5 Seconds
96 - 19.20 nps 10 Seconds
178 - 17.80 nps 30 Seconds
496 - 16.53 nps 1 Minute
938 - 15.63 nps

Color Count

x 817 (35.8%)
x 644 (28.22%)
x 89 (3.9%)
x 526 (23.05%)
x 95 (4.16%)
x 79 (3.46%)
x 3 (0.13%)
x 23 (1.01%)
x 6 (0.26%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.6s0.5s0.33s0.33s0.33s0.33s0.33s0.33s
35
28
21
14
7

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 2272 => 2274
AVG NPS changed: 14.36762 => 14.38027
Hand Bias changed: 8 => 6

Heartbreak Furry Fandom
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- Permission, sync, metadata good.

- 15.731-16.564: Layering here feels a little weird to me. This is technically constant 16ths like the jumpstream just before it. I can see why you may want to drop those to highlight the triplet at 16.398, but it's not clear to me why 15.898 and 15.981 are followed while the other 16ths aren't.
- 23.648: Ghost note.
- 30.398: A little lower than the next jump, suggest [24].
- 37.342: This may just be ear skill issue, but this is way harder for me to pick out than the other 24th flams you have in this section.
- 42.898: Start the 24ths here and make 43.064-43.175 into a minitrill, you know you want to :)
- 43.898: Conversely, I can't hear what the 24ths from this point on go to. Aren't these just 16ths?
- 51.731-53.731: Mmmm. Delicious.
* 55.731-56.564: This sequence is pretty brutal, recommend easing the column 2 bias a bit here.
--> I also struggle with 60.898, but to a lesser degree. This one is probably explainable by me sucking at jacks, so I'm much more fine with this staying as it is, though my personal recommendation would be to move the last note of the 12th jack somewhere else.
- 101.981: Any way to break up this trill?
- 136.064: Perhaps a [24] jumpjack--this feels underaccented given how much more prominent the sound is than all the other little minijacks in this section. Similar note at 138.064 (but probably a different jump than [24]).
- 136.398: Especially in conjunction with the previous note, this minijack sequence feels a bit too strong for the sound.
- 140.231: You're so rude for having this jump share a column with the 3-note jack lol.
- 158.037: Use a minijack pattern like 22341 here, you know you want to :)

Looking good. This file is both well-constructed and playable by humans, which is wonderful. With the disclaimer that I'm fairly rusty right now, I did find the 32nd burst bits mentioned in the 55.731 note to be the hardest part of the file by a pretty significant margin, so I would recommend easing those up a little bit, but they're not egregious. Nice work. [8/10]

Heartbreak Furry Fandom (jh05013) [7/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

7.189: These slide 32nds are odd as they seemingly start at a random moment where the melody might do every so slightly more slided notes but not so much as to warrant this big change. 3.647 for example is a bit slidy too, probably as much as 8.064. Same for 16.106, 1:40.552, 1:58.606, etc. Keep it simple and intuitive. The ones at 2:02.772 & 2:04.606 are good.

9.397: PR, should be the same as 8.897.

16.897-18.897: While this makes sense isolated, it's quite spiky for a section that basically is a buildup for 19.564-21.564. Musically it's weird to have this difficult part and then the climax of the section is easy 16ths.

23.564-25.064: Left hand is quite busy there, could maybe balance that a bit better. Also as an idea, you could ditch the 32nd at 24.522 and make 24.564 a jump as to match the jumps' layering at 24.231.

30.397: PR, (24) would make more sense.

31.397-32.231: This part's sync and notecount is not correct. It sounds ok for 32.231-32.897 however.

39.564: Jump.

42.231: Wow these are pretty unique. Wasn't sure at first but it's probably ok. Interesting.

42.897-43.064: Why this omission?

51.314: 16th here, remove the two 24ths surrounding it.

56.397: Underlayering this to a single on col 4 would make more sense given that it's much friendlier and 56.064 isn't even layered despite being much louder. Actually, maybe even 55.897 should be a single and make 56.064 a jump for the loud kick.

59.594: Fine, but could be a single and add the notes at 59.585 & 59.633.

1:05.064: Bit abrupt given that the wobbles start much earlier but slower (at around 1:03.397).

This chart is alright. It has a pretty solid second half but the first half has notable concerns. That being said, nothing is too egregious and the general feel is fun and somewhat intuitive. Would recommend nerfing 16.897-18.897 a bit as it stands out a decent amount without good musical justification.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 2274 => 2280
AVG NPS changed: 14.38027 => 14.41821
Hand Bias changed: 6 => 2

Thanks for the notes. It's almost finalized, but I played FFR + charted for almost 6 hours today and I'm tired... will get back to it & provide a more detailed changelog this week.

Most comments were applied, but major changes are:
- 16.897-21.564 reworked so that both halves are similar in layering. Still not satisfied with the second half though
- 31.397-32.897 resynced
- 55.564-56.731 nerfed

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 2280 => 2282
AVG NPS changed: 14.41821 => 14.43086
Hand Bias changed: 2 => 0

19.564-21.564 tweaked again.

Notes applied except:
- 0-15.397: idk they sounded pretty flammable
- 23.648: not hearing anything
- 43.564-44.231 has 32nds which I approximated with 24ths
- 1:05.064 is when the wobble gets stronger and more dynamic
- 2:38.037: not hearing anything minijacky