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Dreamin' Attraction!! :: FFR Batch Submission
jacobvl39 -
Dreamin' Attraction!! -
Hino Isuka [5 / 10]
Round-Table Special Batch
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Rejected
BMS - was included in BOFU2015 event
Re-submitting a file that was rejected. Some changes were made according to judge feedback.
Simfile Folder Name
Dreamin' Attraction!! (jacobvl39)Note Count
1959Chart Length
2:14Average NPS
15.0692Estimated Difficulty
93.86
First Note
0:04Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 17
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 44 3 - 25 4 - 413Jumps
x 463
Hands
x 27
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 2
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second11 - 33.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
15 - 30.00 nps 1 Second
28 - 28.00 nps 2 Seconds
52 - 26.00 nps 5 Seconds
114 - 22.80 nps 10 Seconds
194 - 19.40 nps 30 Seconds
535 - 17.83 nps 1 Minute
1025 - 17.08 nps
Color Count
x 726 (37.06%)
x 529 (27%)
x 23 (1.17%)
x 642 (32.77%)
x 15 (0.77%)
x 21 (1.07%)
x 2 (0.1%)
x 1 (0.05%)
x 0 (0%)
Posted at 3:33am on November 15th, 2023
21.406/31.065/32.236/32.382/32.821/32.967/47.601/47.894/1:33.260/1:43.650 - Should be jump
22.065/22.211 - Should be single
25.797 - Should be [14]. Vocals here get the double jump, yet 25.650 isn't Vocal
29.309/29.601 - Move this to [134] to balance the hand bias
48.114/48.406 - Missing note
1:00.919 - Move this to [234] to avoid [1] anchor
1:01.870-1:02.016 - Undeserved mini-jumpjack noise
1:09.114/1:09.406 - Please give the right hand some love by making this a [234]
1:48.992 - Definitely not a minijack noise
1:49.723 - Move this to [4] to lessen anchor on [3]
1:50.967 - Maybe do [12] to avoid extra jack on the [4] soon after
1:58.138-1:59.455 - Pretty sure there's a more flavorful way to step this, but w/e
Aside from technical inconsistencies, the other thing I'd complain about is the hard parts not having balanced hand bias
REJECTED
Posted at 7:28pm on January 7th, 2024
Reject
30.041 / .333 - Feel like you might want notes here
38.528 - may as well be a jump
41.528 - missing
1:17.016 - 1:18.406 - I'm not too thrilled about the 3/2 anchor-ness here
1:28.577 - super nitpcik-y but I'd do something like 4213 here for PR
1:33.260 - jump
1:34.358 - missing
1:36.041 - 1:40.723 -(somewhat subjective) You stopped layering in the melody here, which seems too early. Music doesn't change quite as much as at 1:43.065
-1:40.358 - missing, make minijack to complement 1:36.772
2:01.504 - feels a little too weak for a hand compared to the notes both immediately before and after this. Easiest fix is to reduce this note, it's the only hand in this ending section. Harder fix would be to add more hands as appropriate for piano(harpsichord?) chords in this end section.
It's close. Really close. The chart needs some notable cleanup, but you've otherwise got a damn solid file brewing here.