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IM A FUCKING CAR :: FFR Batch Submission
Hairy Cabbage -
IM A FUCKING CAR -
The Quick Brown Fox [5 / 10]
Round-Table Special Batch
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Rejected
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A slightly modified version of the file released on Thirdstyle a little over a decade ago. Hopefully this is ok... :)
Simfile Folder Name
IM A FUCKING CAR (Hairy Cabbage)Note Count
1398Chart Length
2:00Average NPS
11.9453Estimated Difficulty
82.72
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 24
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 4 4 - 235Jumps
x 464
Hands
x 23
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
13 - 26.00 nps 1 Second
23 - 23.00 nps 2 Seconds
42 - 21.00 nps 5 Seconds
97 - 19.40 nps 10 Seconds
178 - 17.80 nps 30 Seconds
444 - 14.80 nps 1 Minute
751 - 12.52 nps
Color Count
x 596 (42.63%)
x 440 (31.47%)
x 55 (3.93%)
x 300 (21.46%)
x 0 (0%)
x 7 (0.5%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
Posted at 9:46am on September 23rd, 2023
Slight modifications to the weaker section of the chart
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Offset changed: -0.0524036 => -0.052
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Note Count changed: 1356 => 1407
AVG NPS changed: 11.58644 => 12.02222
Hand Bias changed: 20 => 21
Posted at 5:35pm on September 23rd, 2023
Another small tweak
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Hand Bias changed: 21 => 27
Posted at 7:14am on September 27th, 2023
Few small changes + removed old file
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1407 => 1398
AVG NPS changed: 12.02222 => 11.94531
Hand Bias changed: 27 => 24
Posted at 8:38pm on November 13th, 2023
Fixes Required
*Multiple missing 16ths throughout the beginning listed but not limited to: 00:00.127, 00:00.577, 00:02.527, 00:02.977, 00:04.927,
00:05.377, etc. Check your waveforms.
Surprisingly, with the amount of 16ths missed in the intro, the JS section after the intro works well.
00:51.502 -> 00:52.252 might need a little bit of jump cleanup/fixing to better regulate how the vocal-to-jump usage is being portrayed as it swaps to hard bass.
00:56.377 missing 16th from vocals.
*01:38.452 -> to the end, suffers the same issues as the intro due to copy-paste.
Y'know what, if you fixed the 16ths missing from the intro & ending (asterisk'd), this would work out really well.
Posted at 2:28am on November 15th, 2023
Thanks for the comments! Il get on these fixes asap.
Posted at 3:24am on November 19th, 2023
0.127/etc - Recheck intro 16ths
2.302/etc - Shouldn't this be [14] (or whatever the previous jump PR was)?
3.952/4.552/7.252/etc - Should be hand. CymbalCrash. Compare 2.452
14.452-16.251 - What noise are the 8th singles going to?
19.252-36.802 - Many missing 16ths in here
37.439/41.977/42.877 - Missing note
40.702/40.852/50.302/50.452/etc - If vocal is jump for this section, then why are these non-vocals jumps?
1:02.452-1:02.752 - Why jump?
1:06.952 - Should be jump. No CymbalCrash
1:08.152-1:14.452 - What's the layering scheme for the percussion here?
After 1:40.402, it's just more of the same issues
REJECTED
Posted at 8:03pm on November 22nd, 2023
Reject
To some extent, this is unavoidable because of the heavy layering scheme. But hoo boy these 8th anchors are pretty extreme, and don't accent anything making the chart rather confusing to play.
You can definitely use anchors better here, and in certain spots you do - the 3 anchor at 27.877 or the 2/3 "anchor" trill thing at 32.602 are a pretty effective mini climax thing.
Issue affects the main speedcore sections 19.252 - 37.252, 1:19.252 - 1:37.252, 1:52.852 - 1:55.252.
Rest of the chart seems fairly well done, I don't really have much issue with this outside of anchors. But the anchor issue essentially requires structure-level fixes so it's a reject from me.
Posted at 3:10pm on December 4th, 2023
REJECTED
** As a non-charting note, the metadata is slightly incorrect (caps & missing apostrophe). Per Discogs and pretty much all online sources I can find, it should be "I'm A Fucking Car".
- This is honestly quite close to being acceptable, but like Tru, I find the anchoring (mostly throughout the heavy speedcore sections he points out) to be arbitrary and slapdash. These issues are occasionally present outside of those sections, though; for a nice isolated example of what I mean, at 8.152-8.752 you mirrored the second of the motif patterns you use in the intro section but not the first, and it creates a 5-note anchor which is completely musically unjustified. Give the chart another pass through to make sure there is intent and control in how anchors are used.
Also for a technical note which really stood out to me on playtest:
- 41.977, 42.877, etc.: You're layering to the car noises, shouldn't this 16th get a beep?
Posted at 11:05am on January 1st, 2024
1 FR / 3 Reject
Moved to reject.
Thanks for your submission!~