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Number Seven :: FFR Batch Submission
ositzxz369 -
Number Seven -
Venetian Snares [7.5 / 10]
Round-Table Special Batch
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Venetian Snares - is in the "FlashFlashRevolution v9 Permissions Spreadsheet"
Simfile Folder Name
Number Seven (ositzxz369)Note Count
1453Chart Length
1:53Average NPS
13.1137Estimated Difficulty
89.79
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -5
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 64 3 - 91 4 - 3Jumps
x 439
Hands
x 29
Quads
x 1
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 1
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
21 - 21.00 nps 2 Seconds
38 - 19.00 nps 5 Seconds
89 - 17.80 nps 10 Seconds
166 - 16.60 nps 30 Seconds
452 - 15.07 nps 1 Minute
849 - 14.15 nps
Color Count
x 435 (29.94%)
x 398 (27.39%)
x 8 (0.55%)
x 520 (35.79%)
x 0 (0%)
x 59 (4.06%)
x 14 (0.96%)
x 15 (1.03%)
x 4 (0.28%)
Posted at 8:06am on November 17th, 2023
Fixes Required
I'm a bit disappointed that you had to cut the song that early. I understand the middle section is overly repetitive but you could've cut that and continue from 3:14-ish and add some more jacky sections to it.
The audio is also low-quality but for the "low-res" aesthetic I kind of like it that way.
0:08.778 - Ghost note, additionally that minijack is quite fast and early to add before jumping right into the meat of the file.
0:20.287/0:22.701/etc - Ghost note
0:20.804/0:23.218/every other instance of this - Arguably ghost notes as well. Feels like an unnecessary detail. You don't really spot that low-bass noise while playing the file. It also probably makes the transition to the jacks a bit more difficult.
*0:26.752-0:28.476 - This part is super weird to see charted that way. You don't really repeat the same column jumps, but why not do it here? It stands out here significantly more.
0:40.545-0:41.149/etc - All those single notes are ghosted. If you chart the low-bass noise, the last two notes in particular feel redundant.
There are several more notes like this throughout the file. I don't find them working mostly, double check those and consider cleaning.
1:18.994/etc - Very noticable ghost note.
**1:21.063-1:21.494 - The length of this jack for playability purposes is too much. Please either split it or find an alternative that's not as long as this.
*1:25.287-1:25.718 - Same issue as 0:26.752-0:28.476
Most of the time I didn't notice this ghosting flow motif while playtesting the chart, but they become very apparent while vieweing them on editor. Not even on lower rates, they were super noticable to me on 1.0x. It's not an apparent reject as of a result, but honestly I'm not finding myself a fan of this large amount of ghosting. Would suggest to try and cut down some of that and see how it works.
FR on the longjack note (**), CR on (*) notes.
Posted at 6:18pm on December 4th, 2023
FIXES REQUIRED
* 8.779: If this is supposed to be for the second syllable of "seven", that's on the beat at 8.822. This minijack doesn't make sense or feel appropriate.
- 10.991: This is 64th swing, not 96th, and if you're following the swing here then there are many other places in the intro that are technically 64th swing instead of straight 16ths.
I'm going to disagree with Deamerai on the 20.287/etc note, those are very much present and I feel like they should be kept. That said, looking through the file myself I found a lot of notes tenuous/ghosty, and they lined up quite well with what the ones he pointed out, so instead of rehashing that I'm going to say to just refer to Deamerai's notes regarding ghosting because I also think they are problematic. (I'd also like to add an example for the 20.804/etc note: most of the time this hardly affects the jack transition because it's on the other hand, but in places like 64.253 in particular where it forces an OHT into the minijack, that is pretty notable.)
- 69.770: Higher than 69.425.
** 73.391-73.649: This patterning is way more than the sound deserves. Honestly, I'd recommend just removing the second note of each minijack entirely. Also 78.218 etc.
--> Places where there are other instruments near these e.g. the bass at 77.787 and the percussion at 79.368 are fine.
** 81.063: Yeah this jack needs to be reduced, that is preeeetty rough.
I'm mostly cool with this, but the bit around 2/3 through is quite spiky as a result of the two **'d notes and I feel those need to be fixed before acceptance. The song does not back up the difficulty of the chart in the places specified in the first ** note, and while the 81.063 jack is musically backed up, a 6-note jumpjack at 174bpm is pretty wild compared to the whole rest of the chart.
Posted at 11:07am on January 1st, 2024
2 FR
Moved to FR. Address the major stuff above for an accept
Thanks for your submission!~
Posted at 7:27am on February 18th, 2024
For Deam~
8.778 - Removed
20.804/etc - Removed
*26.752-28.476 - While these are all the same kicks, the descending background beat determines the jump PR here
40.545-41.149/etc - Removed
1:18.994/etc - Removed
**1:21.063-1:21.494 - Nerfed to mini-jumpjacks
*1:25.287-1:25.718 - See comment on 26.752-28.476
For Pizza~
*8.779 - Removed minijack
10.991/etc - Synced the relevant intro notes into 64ths
69.770/(74.597) - If by "higher" u mean pitch, then it's actually lower. To which I tweaked the jump PR accordingly
*73.391-73.649 - Removed the 2nd note of each minijack on those hands
**81.063 - Nerfed to mini-jumpjacks
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1514 => 1453
AVG NPS changed: 13.66426 => 13.11372
Hand Bias changed: -12 => -5
Posted at 3:44am on March 15th, 2024
FR notes resolved. Good to go.
One minor nitpick I've found while playing this again is that the ending you only stepped 3 times instead of 4. So the cut ends more abruptly.