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Zyxel - FAR OUT - Tokyo Machine [5 / 10]

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https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1goVL1D37TyZKlYBfER-ZIZlssHdWdq9-gLSdX6A2sII/edit#gid=0&range=A933

my first half-decent file from a few months ago. been waiting for batch to open back up for this very moment!

Simfile Folder Name

FAR OUT (Zyxel)

Note Count

2346

Chart Length

3:13

Average NPS

12.3128

Estimated Difficulty

88.31

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -70

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 19 3 - 61 4 - 80

Jumps

								x 481
							

Hands

								x 14
							

Quads

								x 10
							

Color Jumps

								x 38
							

Color Hands

x 5

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
14 - 28.00 nps 1 Second
25 - 25.00 nps 2 Seconds
40 - 20.00 nps 5 Seconds
83 - 16.60 nps 10 Seconds
157 - 15.70 nps 30 Seconds
427 - 14.23 nps 1 Minute
799 - 13.32 nps

Color Count

x 780 (33.25%)

x 514 (21.91%)

x 68 (2.9%)

x 452 (19.27%)

x 125 (5.33%)

x 163 (6.95%)

x 136 (5.8%)

x 53 (2.26%)

x 55 (2.34%)

Largest Note Gaps

1.03s0.93s0.83s0.77s0.57s0.57s0.57s0.53s

0:28, 1:28, 1:32, 2:29, 2:37 consider remove the quads- they aren't consistent with the jump voicing in other instances. (either that, or make the rest quads, but that feels weird.)

im sick rn so im too lazy to change it this instant, but i'll get around to it

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0.689/9.783/23.751/1:30.876/1:59.748 - Missing note
6.361/1:55.202/1:55.389 - Why jump?
19.392- Should be jumptrill pattern? Sounds similar to 1.392-1.580
25.579/28.579/31.579/etc - Maybe change these CymbalCrashes into Hands
26.517 - Sounds closer 26.454
37.954-38.329 - Might want to lessen the layering on this one. Compare 40.954-41.329/43.954-44.329
49.954-50.048/etc - Not really four 48ths, but three 32nds
1:01.579-1:23.704/1:39.829-1:40.204 - Not much wubstepping
1:10.392-1:10.533 - Not really constant 32nds
2:43.952-2:44.140/etc - Not really 24ths, but 16ths

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- The jumpstream section at the intro feels a bit arbitrarily done. The various funky guitar voices are imo the focus of the song, but the patterning does not accent them meaningfully and the toughest patterns (e.g. the right hand at 5.705-6.080) don't seem to be that way for any reason I can discern.
- I also can't tell what e.g. 8.049 is for, which doesn't help the clarity in this intro section.
- No accenting for sounds like 16.580 also feels odd to me.
- 19.392 is pretty clearly just 16ths, suggest finding another way of accenting than dumping.
* 23.330, 119.326, 131.326 are the same sounds but use completely different rhythms. Make it consistent. (I'd prefer not using the 119.326 version, whichever you stick with.)
* 136.388: This sound in no way warrants a 32nd OHT.
* 157.951-162.076: These sounds are all very similar, but the burst patterning varies hugely in difficulty. Make this more consistent.
* 163.952-174.078: These sounds are clearly enough 16ths that I don't think dumping them as 24ths is justifiable.
- 175.578: Suggest moving this burst off column 4.

I can tell you had a lot of ideas going into this chart, and some of them are quite cool--the two rainbow colour theory bits were quite nice and the 64th flam sections were good too, for a couple examples. Some of it, though, is a bit too experimental. This results in a bit of inconsistency and a strange difficulty curve. The 48ths which force 16th minijacks, for instance, are pretty spiky in general. I feel the sections outside the burst areas could also use more attention to detail as they are currently a bit flavourless.

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Moved to reject.

Thanks for your submission!~

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