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The End of Dreams (Cut Ver.) :: FFR Batch Submission
VisD -
The End of Dreams (Cut Ver.) -
xi [8.25 / 10]
16th Official Tournament (see thread)
PublicEvents
Released
- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "The End of Dreams (Cut Ver.) - xi (visd)" vs "The End of Dreams (Cut Ver.) (VisD)"
✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.
Simfile Folder Name
The End of Dreams (Cut Ver.) - xi (visd)Note Count
2405Chart Length
3:08Average NPS
12.993Estimated Difficulty
92.23
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -1
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 26 4 - 262Jumps
x 496
Hands
x 47
Quads
x 1
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
14 - 28.00 nps 1 Second
22 - 22.00 nps 2 Seconds
38 - 19.00 nps 5 Seconds
86 - 17.20 nps 10 Seconds
166 - 16.60 nps 30 Seconds
482 - 16.07 nps 1 Minute
930 - 15.50 nps
Color Count
x 1001 (41.62%)
x 447 (18.59%)
x 412 (17.13%)
x 411 (17.09%)
x 126 (5.24%)
x 7 (0.29%)
x 1 (0.04%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
Posted at 1:34am on May 27th, 2023
The End of Dreams (Cut ver.)
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- Permission, sync, metadata good.
- 9.885: Not totally sure what this is going to?
- 15.830: Missing 12th
- 31.385: Both piano and percussion here, but not at 31.608--the piano is there, but the percussion is on the 8th at 31.552. A pattern like this may be more fitting: https://i.imgur.com/D2U9DFC.png
- 40.452: Minijacks for emphasis are a fun choice here, I like it.
- 49.916: What's the 32nd for?
- 63.816: follow the 3-note 12th jack here, u won't
- 70.166: This is technically correct, but I had to slow this down to have any idea that there were 24ths here.
- 85.236: Technically 24th at 85.261.
- 118.461: lol (this is fine dw)
- 181.005-ish: Missing piano note.
- In the first minute or so especially, there were several spots where I felt different sounds could have been distinguished a bit better--the same jump would go to a couple different sounds in a short period of time, for instance, or one column would be a bit busier than PR/the instrumentation would indicate. 32.052-35.385 features both of these issues but isn't the only example.
- I do feel the first minute or so of the chart is rather forgettable, but it does find its groove later on for sure--the anchors and streams in the ending section are very fun and memorable. Nice and climactic. A lot of the sections where you have 24ths are pretty quiet and difficult to discern, but I do feel it works. [8/10]
Posted at 1:43am on May 27th, 2023
The End of Dreams (VisD)
- Offset's good.
- I appreciate you're keeping the metadata discipline from osu!mania to include (Cut Ver.) in it, but in the meantime please remove it unless someone decides to chart the full version of this song lmao
1:03.816 - I guess you can be a bit meaner by making these trills instead of ascending rolls, since the piano does play the trilling motion here.
1:57.410 - weeeeeeeee
2:18.210 - Also the same for 1:03.816.
*2:37.710 - This is a bit of an odd representation of 24th triplets, given there's still the piano playing repeated notes in the background.
2:43.610, 2:44.810 & 2:48.110, etc. - Missing jump. (There are quite few of these missing 4th jumps in this section, please check them)
This chart is actually very fun (I haven't even played this in the o!m world cup), but I think the cracks started to show with missing notes at the back end of the song. Other than that, this is good to go, but please address the *'d point and the missing notes. [8.5/10]
Posted at 12:22am on May 30th, 2023
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 2415 => 2405
AVG NPS changed: 13.047 => 12.99298
Hand Bias changed: -17 => -1
Posted at 12:27am on May 30th, 2023
Common feedback:
63.816 and repeat: I added the 3-note jack you guys asked for. I made the transition into it a bit easier but ... :)
Pizza:
9.885 idk either, removed
15.830 added
31.385 done
70.166 removed
85.236 done
181.005 don't hear this
- For the section at 32.052 you highlight, that's completely intentional; I want to capture the increasing intensity of the song and the repetition there. It feels fine to me. Not too sure what else you were concerned about but can address those if you mention them.
Mipha:
2.37.710 This is actually musically the same as the 3-note jack thingy in 63.816/1.03.816 that you guys highlighted, I just didn't want to make it an actual 3 note jack for how soft it is here. I changed the patterning up a bit here.
2:43.610, 2:44.810 & 2:48.110, etc. - I added some jumps here. Honestly I don't even remember the exact layering choice for the jumps here since it's 2 years later and as I'm sure you're aware...this chart isn't the most exacting/precise in its layering decisions :)
Posted at 12:27am on May 30th, 2023
A new chart file was uploaded.
Posted at 12:30am on May 30th, 2023
finalized [unless mipha or pizza give more comments]