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Waterlily Junction :: FFR Batch Submission
kommisar -
Waterlily Junction -
Kandyfan [6.25 / 10]
16th Official Tournament (see thread)
PublicTokenPurchasedSecretEvents
Rejected
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4273001&postcount=2
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Simfile Folder Name
Waterlily Junction (Kommisar)Note Count
2041Chart Length
3:22Average NPS
10.2391Estimated Difficulty
82.03
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -75
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 5 4 - 379Jumps
x 401
Hands
x 20
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
22 - 22.00 nps 2 Seconds
41 - 20.50 nps 5 Seconds
87 - 17.40 nps 10 Seconds
149 - 14.90 nps 30 Seconds
434 - 14.47 nps 1 Minute
759 - 12.65 nps
Color Count
x 776 (38.02%)
x 342 (16.76%)
x 349 (17.1%)
x 321 (15.73%)
x 52 (2.55%)
x 77 (3.77%)
x 4 (0.2%)
x 102 (5%)
x 18 (0.88%)
Posted at 9:11pm on November 14th, 2023
Waterlily Junction
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- Permission good.
** File contains stops, which violates submission rules. Please remove.
** Metadata contains background, banner, and cdtitle info. Please remove.
** Sync has issues. The fix is a bit complex due to the bpm changes in the song, but large swaths of the chart are offsync by up to around 25ms as it stands; there are multiple different problems in multiple different sections, so I won't go into detail here, but I'd advise just resyncing this from scratch in DDream (I'm assuming this was made in the SM editor due to the presence of stops and a positive offset?) and pasting the chart back into there.
In light of these fundamental problems, I will not give a detailed review, but I will mention a couple other sticking points that I would need to see changed before accepting this:
- 13.646, 2:31.076: Please change these patterns. This is dangerously close to being Shotgun Surgery v2, and this pattern is way more difficult than the song's intensity would suggest it should be here.
- 1:58.409: This OHT does not make sense and is spiky.
- I find anchor use in general is a bit extreme and is done with little consciousness for difficulty curve of the file. The unanchored sections are for the most part pretty trivial compared to the anchored ones, which does not always fit the song very well. [5/10]
Posted at 9:16pm on November 14th, 2023
Waterlily Junction (Kommisar) [7.5/10, CQ/FR*]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
13.646-15.712 - Would be nice of you to make this long trill two-handed
45.246 - Why jump?
1:00.712 - Missing note
*1:12.237-1:15.387/1:16.462-1:17.396/1:18.312-1:36.113 - Please fix sync
1:23.405 - Why jump?
1:27.259 - Missing note
1:43.249/1:44.837/1:45.124 - Why jump?
*1:47.467-1:51.530 - Please fix sync
2:06.142 - Missing jump
2:07.942 - Ghost note
2:09.742/2:09.809 - Missing jump
2:13.809/2:16.209/2:17.409/2:18.609/2:19.809 - What noise is this note going to?
2:19.876 - Missing jump
2:30.209 - Could add a note here for the descending noise
2:31.076-2:34.076 - Make the long trill two-handed and apply some PR for the ascending melody?
2:37.609-2:38.542 - Two-handed trill? Perchance
2:44.009 - Missing note
2:51.342/2:51.876 - Why jump?
2:57.476 - This jump should not be part of the jack, but 2:57.642 could be part of it
3:05.442/3:05.476 - These two notes are late by one 32nd
3:18.542 - Sounds closer to 3:18.576
3:19.492 - Would make a less jarring ending if the last note was on 3:20.809 instead
>>Mostly straightforward & consistent. See asterisk
Posted at 9:18pm on November 14th, 2023
Since there is a 2+ point disparity between judges' ratings with one above the accept barrier and one below, this file is getting another opinion from a third judge. Hang tight.
Posted at 3:10pm on November 16th, 2023
The sync issue here is definitely a big detractor, and very noticeable in playtest. Definitely seems like this was stepped without a visual editor.
The Shotgun Surgery trills are also a definite non-starter.
Ositz' notes also point out a minor issue with layering consistency through much of the chart
I feel the chart needs to pay a bit closer attention to some details, some sync work and some appropriate nerfs -- Pizza and ositz have done a good job pointing out which, primarily with OHTs. Adds up to too much to cover with an FR flag, so have to reject this.