The Hallowed :: FFR Batch Submission
basicdrummerman - The Hallowed - Clonepa [6.25 / 10]
16th Official Tournament (see thread)
PublicTokenPurchasedEvents
Rejected
blanket https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4273001&postcount=2

Simfile Folder Name

The Hallowed (basicdrummerman)

Note Count

2205

Chart Length

3:24

Average NPS

10.9249

Estimated Difficulty

83.27

First Note

0:02

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 13

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 29 3 - 29 4 - 5

Jumps

x 526

Hands

x 62

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
7 - 21.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
19 - 19.00 nps 2 Seconds
36 - 18.00 nps 5 Seconds
85 - 17.00 nps 10 Seconds
168 - 16.80 nps 30 Seconds
463 - 15.43 nps 1 Minute
832 - 13.87 nps

Color Count

x 1000 (45.35%)
x 492 (22.31%)
x 147 (6.67%)
x 565 (25.62%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 1 (0.05%)

Largest Note Gaps

2.73s2.7s2.7s2.57s0.67s0.37s0.37s0.37s
35
28
21
14
7

updated some missing notes, move around end js, if its too hard for the ending i can tone it down.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
----------
Note Count changed: 2701 => 2710
AVG NPS changed: 11.01101 => 11.0477
Hand Bias changed: 25 => 24

A new chart file was uploaded.

Stepauthor made a massive change to the file but batch was already closed but not yet judged, so I've uploaded it here for them.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
----------
Offset changed: -0.054 => 1.455
MP3 Length changed: 4:09 => 3:26
----------
Note Count changed: 2708 => 2205
Chart Length changed: 4:08 => 3:24
AVG NPS changed: 11.03954 => 10.92486
First Delay changed: 0:03 => 0:02
Hand Bias changed: 22 => 13

The Hallowed (basicdrummerman) [6.5/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

22.949: Why no jump here? Isn't the layering jumps on either two instruments of drums/bells/wub? See 24.644 for example.

45.151: Missing note. See also 47.863 & 50.574 & 55.998 & 58.709 etc.

45.829: Missing note (kick).

49.727: Jump, 44.304 did it correctly.

53.201: Feels like a ghost note.

1:04.895: Quite odd to omit this one for the hand transition instead of 1:05.065 which is much less clear and noticeable.

1:05.234: Ghost note arguably? See also 1:05.404 & 1:06.082 etc. These are so buried by the loud kicks in this section so it's not intuitive to play them given a lot of clearer sounds were omitted prior to the section.

1:48.457: Missing note.

2:04.717: Now it's a ghost note lol.

2:04.971: Jump?

2:09.463: Jump.

2:26.413-2:48.106: The wubs are actually on the 8ths, not 12ths.

2:48.897: Odd PR here, why minijack with the preceding 4th?

2:54.320: PR too.

This chart is a fair bit blurry in terms of layering decisions. There's decent consistency despite some minor errors. There's also a Lot of repetition; the song is 3:22 and more than half of it is the same drum loop. Could see this being much more approachable with a cut to make the chart more varied.

The Hallowed (basicdrummerman) [6/10]

- Perms, metadata, sync are good

0:29.390 - Not part of the rock layering chain?
0:45.829 - Kick, missing jump/note
0:52.015 - Why not on the very right column like you did before? This seems inconsistent to me. In the next segment you did place those minijacks on column 4
0:53.371 - Column 4 for the kick to minijack?
0.54.133, 0:54:303 - No jumps?
0:43.287-1:03.285 - As a whole, in all the isolated minijack kick sections, you have places where you use 4th jumps and in some places you don't, what is the purpose of the jumped 4ths there?
1:07.098 & 1:11.166 - Column variaton? You already did those minijacks a section prior to that
1:15.064 - Variation? You usually vary between all the jumps in the JS but this one happens close to the jump prior
1:15.827-1:26.334 - Why some of the minijacks happen again on the same column close to each other? Variation suggestion perhaps? Also, if you look at note 0:43.287-1:03.285 the jump issue is not present here
1:29.215 - Not [14]? This also eliminates the ambiguity on the 3 note anchor on column 3
1:32.266 - No minijack??
1:33.961, 1:36.672 - Variation?
1:47.010-1:48.027 - Really iffy about the technical approach for this, the kicks here stand out a lot more than the one you do jumps for
1:49.564 - PR, sounds the same as 1:48.866
2:04.971 - Missing jump
2:04.971-2:15.649 - Now this is what I would consider proper variation for the minijacks, nice job there
2:09.463 - Missing jump
2:10.818 - See 1:15.064
2:13.276 - ^
**2:26.413-2:47.767 - What is going on with the layering of jumps and hands for the 4ths? It makes zero sense to me
2:48.784-2:49.349 - Why is this a set of minijacks, while 2:54.207-2:54.772 is a set of minijack-ish chain
2:58.952-3:08.443 - Inconsistent variation of minijack columns, there's a segment when it happens three times on the same column
3:09.799-3:20.307 - On the other hand, this is perfectly varied, comapre the two and make the changes necessary

This file needs some more polish. The flow feels pretty inconsistent and it's quite noticable in the file. The idea is there though.