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Breakbeats Saying Sorry :: FFR Batch Submission
Deamerai -
Breakbeats Saying Sorry -
The Flashbulb [6.5 / 10]
16th Official Tournament (see thread)
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Simfile Folder Name
Breakbeats Saying Sorry (Deamerai)Note Count
2033Chart Length
2:36Average NPS
13.2529Estimated Difficulty
94.25
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -31
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 34 3 - 102 4 - 111Jumps
x 552
Hands
x 8
Quads
x 4
Color Jumps
x 32
Color Hands
x 1
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second11 - 33.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
14 - 28.00 nps 1 Second
26 - 26.00 nps 2 Seconds
49 - 24.50 nps 5 Seconds
98 - 19.60 nps 10 Seconds
184 - 18.40 nps 30 Seconds
461 - 15.37 nps 1 Minute
868 - 14.47 nps
Color Count
x 701 (34.48%)
x 596 (29.32%)
x 110 (5.41%)
x 379 (18.64%)
x 30 (1.48%)
x 95 (4.67%)
x 17 (0.84%)
x 62 (3.05%)
x 43 (2.12%)
Posted at 1:34am on May 27th, 2023
Breakbeats Saying Sorry
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- Permission, sync, metadata good.
- Recommend cutting the last 18 seconds of the song if you're not going to use them.
- 21.696-24.210: You're using right handed trills for a lot of different things here. Strongly suggest mixing patterning up here. Also 96.780 section.
- 26.892: Why quad?
- 39.503: The buzz doesn't start to fade back in until the 24th at 39.573. You could maybe stretch it and do 48ths starting on the 16th at 39.545, but as is I don't like this--too close to the dense pattern just beforehand, and contrasts acutely with places like 34.769 where the bursts are properly done.
** 42.925: This needs a nerf.
* 50.020-51.026: Misrhythm, the jumps are straight 3/32nds the whole way through.
* 50.188: Minijack makes no sense here. (It does at 50.523, though.)
** 53.037: Wait, why is this a split jumpjack instead of just trilly singles like you had before? If it's for the kicks, why are 52.534 and 52.702 singles? This is way too aggressive and doesn't make sense within the structure of the chart.
- 59.070: Suggest a less STRAWBERRY SWEETZ-y transition.
** 73.819: Owwww. 6-note 268bpm OHT is really painful, and this is super dense. Please make this a two-handed trill.
- 104.322, 106.668: Your anchor control is usually quite nice, but watch out for it here.
- 132.211: This is a lot more aggressive than your usual pattern for this sound.
- 132.813: This too. Ow that right hand is awkward.
- 140.691: And this too. Oww that left hand.
- 142.031: Same.
- 146.766: Only really starts increasing in intensity later at 146.808.
- Man. I want to like this chart, but it's just too overbearing in some parts. I get you're intentionally taking a pretty aggressive approach with the file, but the bursts can be quite inconsistent in difficulty and it just doesn't really work. This needs a heavy pass for smoothing before acceptance. Technically looks pretty good though, and I do like your anchor control for the melody. [6.5/10]
Posted at 1:37am on May 27th, 2023
Breakbeats Saying Sorry (Deamerai)
- Offset's good.
*7.701 - This is a hand-biased note that placed on the same hand as the 4-note jack. Mirror this 16th please. (so does for 18.427)
24.405 - This shouldn't share the same jump as 24.210.
33.637 - Missing 32nd.
42.925 - This 24th minijack transition to the hand is oof
*1:22.785 - Same as 7.701. (and 1:33.511)
1:51.528 - Missing note.
This chart is pretty aggressively done, and even though it plays okay, I'm certainly not a fan of this aggressive approach took for the bursts used, especially the transitions and that's mostly my main gripe in this chart. I just think this chart could benefit in toning down the bursts and more of the smaller concerns overall, since as it is this is a touch outside of the acceptable state. [6.5/10]
Posted at 2:27pm on June 26th, 2023
Rating appealed to FR. FR conditions are my **'d notes and Mipha's *'d notes.
Posted at 3:08pm on June 26th, 2023
FR notes applied & most additional notes
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 2034 => 2033
AVG NPS changed: 13.25945 => 13.25293
Hand Bias changed: -24 => -31
Posted at 3:01pm on August 20th, 2023
FR fixes have been met and so the file has been moved to accepted, but I would really like to see 39.503 changed. The roll is quite noticeably in the incorrect position, and while the hand it biases is the easier one in the grand scheme of the burst, this is still one of the tougher sections in the chart. See 146.808 (coming out of the similar burst pattern at 146.221) for a correct example.
Posted at 3:20am on October 6th, 2023
Fixed position
A new chart file was uploaded.