Time Jacker :: FFR Batch Submission
WirryWoo - Time Jacker - onoken [7.75 / 10]
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Simfile Folder Name

Time Jacker (WirryWoo)

Note Count

1418

Chart Length

2:02

Average NPS

11.8893

Estimated Difficulty

78.51

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -28

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 6 3 - 102 4 - 7

Jumps

x 346

Hands

x 35

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
13 - 26.00 nps 1 Second
21 - 21.00 nps 2 Seconds
35 - 17.50 nps 5 Seconds
82 - 16.40 nps 10 Seconds
145 - 14.50 nps 30 Seconds
406 - 13.53 nps 1 Minute
734 - 12.23 nps

Color Count

x 518 (36.53%)
x 340 (23.98%)
x 21 (1.48%)
x 522 (36.81%)
x 0 (0%)
x 15 (1.06%)
x 2 (0.14%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.5s0.4s0.4s0.4s0.4s0.4s0.4s0.4s
35
28
21
14
7

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1397 => 1408
AVG NPS changed: 11.71325 => 11.80548
Hand Bias changed: -23 => -24

A new chart file was uploaded.

Time Jacker
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- Permission, sync, metadata good.

- 10.507: This minijack doesn't feel super justified.
- 15.117: If you're following the 8ths from 13.364-14.338, this should probably also be included.
- 40.636-42.585: The jacks are all on the right hand here, which is a bit straining. They are decently well separated, so it's not a huge issue, but you may wish to rebalance them a bit more. Also 47.260-49.598.

- This 3-note jack section in general leaves me a bit conflicted. I get what you're going for and I wouldn't reject or FR it as it is, but most of these bass triplets you're following with jacks have louder and more prominent sounds on the last two notes and I feel this section would work better with 2-note minijacks to emphasize those louder sounds in the song.

- 52.909: Why jump?
- 54.662, 60.896: Perhaps [23]4 for PR? This pattern plays strictly descending, but the next note is quite high.
- 64.890: 16th jack would play a bit smoother on column 2, currently a bit tougher since it's already coming out of an offset-8th anchor on column 1.
* 76.091-76.675: Notable misrhythm; there are no 12ths here, these are actually 16th triplets. The 12ths just after this are correct.
- 90.312: Why jump?
- 102.000: You've got a nice kick anchor on 1 here which this note does not fit into. Suggest swapping columns of this and the previous note to make it clearer, i.e. [24]13[24] from the beat at 101.805.
- 104.662: This exists, but it's quite subtle. I would not include it without also including the much more prominent note at 104.727.
* 115.636: Whoa there, this is pretty rough. In addition to being the only 4-note jack in the file, there's a bunch of other minijack stuff on the left hand just after this. To keep the motif but moderate difficulty, please use something like a [34][34][12][134] instead.

- Good file, but this is pretty imbalanced in difficulty--the jumpstreams are essentially trivial in comparison to the jack bits. This seems intentional and it's fine by me, but there are definitely things you could do to lessen this disparity while still keeping the soul of the file. I would definitely like you to break up that 4-note jack in the ending, and while I feel less strongly about the 3-note jack section earlier on, I feel nerfing it could also help to clarify its intent. [7.5/10]

Time Jacker (WirryWoo) [8/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

9.808 - Sounds closer to 9.792
17.941/24.175/40.052/1:17.065 - Missing note
21.740 - Should be [3]
34.305 - Should be [2]
40.149 - Ghost note. No minijack noise
1:04.889-1:05.181 - Could do 2[23]21 to lessen the [1] anchor on the jacking
1:16.220 - Dunno what this 12th is going to, but this is actually two 16ths of 1:16.188/1:16.285
1:16.610 - Dunno what this 12th is going to, but this is actually three 32nds of 1:16.578/1:16.626/1:16.675

>>Straightforward & consistent

Moving this to DC Engine, as it has been over a month without acknowledgement of notes or fixes, and file is appended with the 'Accepted' tag. If you need to make fixes, @ me on Discord or DM me with the fixes, so I can forward them to Difficulty Consultants for a proper rating.

Applied fixes

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1408 => 1418
AVG NPS changed: 11.80548 => 11.88932
Hand Bias changed: -24 => -28