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My Rage Towards Society :: FFR Batch Submission
ositzxz369 -
My Rage Towards Society -
Dolphin [8.5 / 10]
16th Official Tournament (see thread)
PublicPurchasedSecretEvents
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BOF perms - https://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=More_def&num=433&event=140 - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ld0ES9t77Ok - https://soundcloud.com/dolphin/my-rage-towards-society
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Simfile Folder Name
My Rage Towards Society (ositzxz369)Note Count
1355Chart Length
2:20Average NPS
9.8522Estimated Difficulty
68.77
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -47
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 1 4 - 37Jumps
x 178
Hands
x 70
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
19 - 19.00 nps 2 Seconds
34 - 17.00 nps 5 Seconds
78 - 15.60 nps 10 Seconds
125 - 12.50 nps 30 Seconds
361 - 12.03 nps 1 Minute
622 - 10.37 nps
Color Count
x 533 (39.34%)
x 507 (37.42%)
x 7 (0.52%)
x 279 (20.59%)
x 8 (0.59%)
x 4 (0.3%)
x 4 (0.3%)
x 7 (0.52%)
x 6 (0.44%)
Posted at 11:07pm on May 13th, 2023
My Rage Towards Society
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- Permission, sync, metadata good.
- As general note, I'm not a fan of the minijacks--they're not strictly repeated sounds and feel like a rather clunky way of giving emphasis, and they stand out within the difficulty curve of the chart as well given how it's mostly light broken jumpstream. OHTs may work better. At 51.610 even a [13]2[34] could work.
- 42.947: This runningman is an excellent choice all around.
- 49.204: Brass plays a 16th triplet here.
- 64.765: Piano is technically a 32nd triplet here. Suggest 312.
- 70.300: Misrhythm--this is the middle note of a 3/32nd triplet. That is, this should be moved to the 64th at 70.320.
- 84.057: Missing piano note.
- 106.797: I think this is one of the more justifiable minijacks since it has some percussion backing it up, but it should be moved to column 2 for sure. This right hand pattern requires a ton of control.
- 133.188: This is slightly rude for the ending lol. [24][13] would preserve emphasis on the sound but be a bit less mean (especially if the other minijacks are going).
- Phenomenal. This is a 9.5 outside the minijacks for sure. They're... okay, but I do think the file would be better off with them removed. Technical mistakes are very slight, the structure and layering scheme are perfect, patterns are snappy yet fluid. Great stuff. [9/10]
Posted at 11:10pm on May 13th, 2023
My Rage Towards Society (ositzxz369) [8/10]
> Permission check good.
> Sync looks good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found within simfile properties.
> No issues found within submission folder contents.
- 0:12.626 I'm really concerned about that synth. Its extremely quiet compared to the rest of the song. It rests on that borderline between audible and inaudible that im not sure if its the right call to chart it. At first i though 0:15.674 was filled with ghost notes due to how much the percussion overpowers the synth. I'm not entirely sure the players will be able to pick up on it.
- 1:03.642 This pattern sucks. It feels extra arbitrary and doesn't at all reflect the song. I'd suggest going for something similar to 0:6.209 as that kind of pattern really fits much better than whats already there. also i'd chart the cymbal at 1:04.685 I think a pattern like 12[34] will really play into that piano note too.
- 1:13.749 An argument could be made here to chart the percussion similar to how you do at 1:39.899. I know its a calmer section but it feels like more could be added.
- 1:37.492 Please just make this a jump trill. With the entire band playing the same rhythm it feels so wrong to not even have a chord.
- 2:16.717 free cymbal you could chart.
Totally not what i'd expect out of an ositz chart. Your style works surprisingly well with this kind of song.
Posted at 1:01am on May 14th, 2023
To Pizza:
Nerfed the minijacks into non-minijack singles. Recheck 2.760, 13.990, 24.257, 39.818, 51.690, 54.417, 61.957, 111.048, and 121.316
64.765 - How about 213 instead?
106.797 - Nerfed to non-minijack single
133.188 - How about 3[124] instead?
To Storn:
Nerfed the minijacks into non-minijack singles. Recheck 2.760, 13.990, 24.257, 39.818, 51.690, 54.417, 1:01.957, 1:46.797, 1:51.048, and 2:01.316
1:03.642 - How does this pattern suck? It's just an ascending PR. Also, I'll omit 1:04.685 to clearly separate the sax from the piano
1:37.492 - Diff section, diff layering
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1352 => 1355
AVG NPS changed: 9.83034 => 9.85216
Hand Bias changed: -44 => -47